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Florence The Goat Lover – FV She had a wicked laugh, witchlike Bringing forth Gingerbread House Fright She lived with goats They walked through the house gladly Front door was gone She wore men’s clothing Overalls, and she wore a black derby Her gray hair stuck out in crazy ways We were terrified of her Florence, the Goat Lover gave us Wild stories about black snakes Curling around her tomatoes She killed them with a hoe Which she carried and shook at us When she wanted to demonstrate Her murdering ways, She told us about hangings too. She had seen them In her days as a child. We were mesmerized and terrified Running out to be with her and her goats Whenever we could as she walked between gardens. The goat had a bell, which called us out of our childhood laziness. The most interesting, frightening, Terrifying non-woman-like woman We had ever met, in our ten years of life. Florence, our childhood hero. She lived her life on her own terms, Not caring about social norms or niceties. She taught me it is okay to be me. My childhood hero, who always Shrieked a maniacal Tasmania Devil screech when she saw a snake. Delighting us in her joy of a good kill. Written 2-28-2019 Contest: What’s In a Name Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 3/19/2019 6:45:00 AM
Awesome ! Its moments like these Caren that make us realize who we are, Loved it to no end. Congrats, !
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/19/2019 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Pixie Dust. I used her real name, in hopes that her neice and nephew will not sue me. She only has two living "almost heirs" that I know of, and I do not think they would mind. I hope not anyhow.
Date: 3/19/2019 5:55:00 AM
I sure misinterpreted the contest; I thought it had to be about where my name came from. Based on 1st and 2nd, my cognitive skills failed me! This is delightful with great energy and each thought expressed is filled with originality, Caren. Enjoyed very much and please accept my congratulations!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/19/2019 9:22:00 AM
CayCay, thank you for the stop by. It is always lovely to get a visit from you, my friend. I had to read the instructions several times before I felt I understood them. They were tricky I thought.
Date: 3/19/2019 4:20:00 AM
What an amazing free spirit Florence was Caren and this is such a wonderful tribute to her, for she clearly left her uniqueness imprinted somewhere inside you, as you write with such passion about her. Congratulations on your top win in this contest . Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/19/2019 9:23:00 AM
She was the best! I loved running out there, half terrified, but eager to hear her horror stories about killing snakes and watching hangings.
Date: 3/19/2019 1:57:00 AM
This was such a delight to read, Caren...so entertaining and even memorable. Congrats on your win too!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/19/2019 3:35:00 AM
Thank you Carole. She was such a character! So much fun to think of her. Now she may be remembered by some.
Date: 3/18/2019 8:53:00 PM
Wow, Caren, what a colorful character as a childhood hero you had who "mesmerized and terrified" at the same time with her stories and odd witchlike ways! I very much enjoyed reading this, and I congratulate you on your well-deserved podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/19/2019 12:30:00 AM
Thank you Sandra. She is a real person, and this was her name, and she was wonderful in her uniqueness. I will never forget her!
Date: 3/18/2019 6:11:00 PM
This poem tickled me! Love it through and through! Congratulations on your second place win in my contest, Caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/19/2019 12:30:00 AM
Thank you Kim. Florence was a wonderful woman who delighted and terrorized us simultaneously.

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