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Florence But Not Italy

I never associated weather-faced seventy-year-old Florence with Italy until today, sixty years later. Florence’s hands moved as fast as she talked. She was usually accompanied by her favorite goat, Gladys, who knew when to bleat and when to keep still. Florence’s mouth was always going; she had a reputation she had to maintain. We neighbor kids either loved or hated her; there was no in between. She looked like a wizened witch, wearing men’s overalls, grimy shirts, and that silly hat with the goat bite out of the brim. My sister was terrified of her at first, but I despised her until I was forced to know her by my insistent mother. My initial aversion revised itself into an eerie fascination which eventually bordered on Florence love. She told the most entertaining gruesome macabre stories imaginable. At ten, I remember hanging onto every word about three men who were hanged, a twelve foot garden snake, and other deplorable things I was not allowed to hear anywhere else. This was the sixties, when TV was tame, all cowboys and Indians. So I was grateful to have Florence. Here she is now, walking Gladys. Have to go. More later.

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Date: 5/2/2022 12:11:00 PM
you've really brought florence to life, caren! i think your mother did a good thing by forcing you to know her,, although i'm sure it didn't seem that way at the time...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/3/2022 1:20:00 PM
She FORCED us to go to Florence's house for a surprise birthday party for 83 year old OWNIE her sister. We had a blast! They were both dolled up in dresses and they used fine dainty china with tiny flowers and lace doilies and cloth napkins; it was so fancy! We were in shock, but we LOVED it.
Date: 5/1/2022 8:23:00 PM
Ha! Every kid should have his or her Florence!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/2/2022 3:43:00 AM
I agree!

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