Floating on A Breeze

Flight of a butterfly on a spring day colorful wings dancing to nature's song

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2024 3:36:00 AM

Yes, aren't they delightful. I haven't seen one yet this spring. Maybe in a couple of weeks. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page with congrats. Sara K

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 3/4/2024 5:02:00 AM

Lovely write adored reading your work.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/29/2024 7:11:00 PM

I enjoy watching' colorful wings ' flutter in Spring. Butterflies are so elegant and graceful. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2024 10:14:00 AM

what a lovely ninette, joseph!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/28/2024 7:06:00 AM

Your poem brings forth the butterfly rejoicing nature's song. Lovely write, Joseph.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/28/2024 5:55:00 AM

Hey Joe, Your poem is pure joy! The short lines and playful imagery make it feel like a dance itself. I can practically see the butterfly's colorful wings fluttering! It captures the essence of spring beautifully. - Blessings, Daniel

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/28/2024 4:50:00 AM

Joseph, your choice of a beautiful imagery title and subject for your poem is truly awesome. Excellent job.

Daisy Meadows

Date: 2/28/2024 3:10:00 AM

A lovely picture, title and poem. Well done.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/27/2024 7:57:00 PM

This is a great image. I'm looking forward to butterflies in a few months. The cat likes them too