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Floating Melody - Sq

Midway on vacation spree he looked in my eyes Dancing to velvet ballads playing in reprise Hues of azure twilight through swaying maple tree He looked in my eyes midway on vacation spree Bathed in honeyed mist drizzled whispers made us fly Lilac primrose petals caressed golden blue sky Parched sand dunes held rippled oasis to be kissed Drizzled whispers made us fly, bathed in honeyed mist We floated through greenwood embraced by mystic haze Wet twigs preserved our footprints of secrets ablaze Fluffy clouds spiraled lucid drops on cuckoo's hood Embraced by mystic haze, we floated through greenwood Scented petrichor repose, sprayed by flaming muse I paused his melodious hush to let it fuse Into the rivulets cruising in those meadows Sprayed by flaming muse, scented petrichor repose June 4, 2020 Swap The Verse Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May ~Winner: 1st Place STRAND NO 790,any form,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand ~Winner: 1st Place

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 7/2/2020 3:47:00 PM

This is so well written and congrats on your top win! Every poem you write is better than the one before! Well done!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:47:00 PM

I am honored by such encouraging words Krish. Thank you for your kind appreciation. Blessings :)

John Hamilton

Date: 6/29/2020 5:50:00 PM

A beautiful write congrats on another win Aditi!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:05:00 PM

Thank you for your kind appreciation John! Blessings

Funom Makama

Date: 6/29/2020 2:51:00 PM

This is awesome, so beautifully written. Well deserved placement.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:04:00 PM

Glad you love my words Funom. Thanks for your visit and kind words of appreciation. Blessings!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/29/2020 3:36:00 AM

Aditi, kudos, your vocabulary of adjectives is infinite. Wonderful write and placement. Mohan

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:04:00 PM

Glad you love my words Mohan. Thank you for your gracious appreciation. God bless you :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/29/2020 12:31:00 AM

BIG CONGRATS ADITI TO WIN TOP. Gorgeous. Each sentence demands glamour. LOve.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:03:00 PM

Always an honor to be appreciated by you Ma'am :) Thank you for your kind wishes. Blessings and love :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/28/2020 8:04:00 PM

Wonderfully orchestrated, Aditi, an admirable rendering pleasantly framed, my compliments on your 1st Place win -- Aloha~@wk

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:03:00 PM

Glad you love my words William! Thanks for your visit and your kind words. Blessings :)

David Mohn

Date: 6/28/2020 7:04:00 PM

Your imagination is quite exotic...congratulations Aditi :)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:02:00 PM

Glad you love my words David. Thanks for appreciating. Blessings :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/28/2020 6:21:00 PM

Such a vividly descriptive, romantic masterpiece--a WINNING poem, Aditi! Janice

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:01:00 PM

Thanks for your generous appreciation Janice. Blessings!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2020 5:04:00 PM

such outstanding imagery. Congrats on the great first place.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:01:00 PM

Thank you for your kind wishes Andrea! Blessings and love :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/28/2020 5:02:00 PM

Back with BIG congrats my friend for yet another win, at the TOP of #1. Well done, as always, Aditi.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:01:00 PM

Thank you for your gracious wishes dear friend. Always blessed to be appreciated by you. God bless you :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/28/2020 4:59:00 PM

A poem beautifully composed, and well enjoyed, congratulations on your 1st place win dear poet. xo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:00:00 PM

Glad you loved my words. Thank you for your kind wishes. Blessings

Joseph May

Date: 6/28/2020 3:28:00 PM

"Bathed in honeyed mist drizzled whispers made us fly", Beautiful write Aditi, Congrats on your win

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/28/2020 3:43:00 PM

Thank you for your kind appreciation and for my placement in your contest Joseph! God bless you :)

Janis Thompson

Date: 6/28/2020 3:27:00 PM

Congratulations on two first place wins. Excellent pieces of writing. Great talent.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/28/2020 3:42:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Janis. Blessings and love :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/28/2020 3:19:00 PM

Back with congratulations Aditi, another well deserved win with this poetic gem . Tom

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/28/2020 3:20:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and kind wishes Tom. Blessings :)

John Watt

Date: 6/28/2020 2:13:00 PM

Thank you again for this beautiful word painting, and congrats for your win ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/28/2020 3:19:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation my friend. Hope you have a good day :) God bless you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/28/2020 12:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Your pen was once again writing beauty. Did you say, Vacation???? I need one. Enjoy your day and win..........

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/28/2020 1:58:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Paula! I guess we all need a vacation now :) God bless you!

John Watt

Date: 6/9/2020 4:09:00 PM

Another excellent #1 win Aditi, very happy for you! Keep writing and inspiring, my friend ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/10/2020 12:19:00 PM

Thank you for dropping by to convey your warm wishes dear friend. Always a pleasure to read from you :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/6/2020 6:49:00 AM

Your exquisite imagery takes my breath away; it is written so beautifully!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 10:14:00 AM

Thank you for your generous words of appreciation Caren. It is always a pleasure to read hour thoughts on my words. Blessings :)

John Watt

Date: 6/5/2020 2:05:00 AM

Such a delight to read and imagine myself in this picture with your imagery of trees, flowers, sand, sea, melody, and aromas of romance. All so soothing and romantic. A challenge to write in this form which you made feel very natural and flowing. Best wishes in the contest, I think this will do very well. Blessings, John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/5/2020 6:17:00 AM

I am so glad my words could paint that beauty for you though I must say beauty is in the eyes of the beholder and you have a way of perceiving things in a positive way. Thank you for your generous words of appreciation my friend :) God bless you.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/4/2020 10:41:00 PM

I love the beautiful and dreamy imagery, Aditi! This is my kind of vacation....love it...a FAVE! Hugs, Rhonda

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/5/2020 1:54:00 AM

Glad you loved it Rhonda. Thank you for appreciating and for the fave. Blessings and love :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/4/2020 9:56:00 PM

Your words are beautiful and very professionally done, Aditi. It should place very high in the contest. Hugs Eve

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/5/2020 1:54:00 AM

Thank you for your wonderful words of appreciation Eve. I am blessed by your words. God bless you :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/4/2020 1:45:00 PM

Quite a romantic verse Aditi, well written, I like the swap quatrain. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/4/2020 2:02:00 PM

Glad you loved it Tom. I enjoyed writing in swap quatrain form too. Thank you for your wishes. God bless you :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/4/2020 10:29:00 AM

A rather beautiful write Aditi, such romantic tones spread throughout this lovely piece. Hope all is well with you, Blessings, Gordon

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/4/2020 10:58:00 AM

Your kind words of appreciation mean a lot to me. Thank you for your lovely blessings Gordon. God bless you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/4/2020 9:51:00 AM

Beautifully done--charming romantic swap quatrain, Aditi. A sure win for you.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/4/2020 10:03:00 AM

Blessed by your gracious appreciation Vijay. Thank you so much. Blessings :)