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Floating Marshmallows

Yummy wish can touch They float in the sky high above Wanting to be eaten.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/27/2009 5:05:00 AM
Dear Elizabeth, WOW The Title is deceptive to the Haiku Genius A very clever Write Superb LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/27/2009 1:36:00 PM
A new view of the sky, makes me want to fly! I was expecting hot chocolate from the title. LOL Very well done. Smiles from Lolita
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