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Floating Fields

I feel the fleeting whispers of the wind
it fills my fragile wings like yellow sails
to float about these mellow marshes 
in dawn’s light
a scenic dream, setting all things right. 

Alight with life, I make my dizzy way
among the reeds
and lazily loop both high and low
to drink a sip of nectar, brief
or maybe a morsel of tasty leaf
then land and settle underneath. 

This dream is bright and hopeful, too
with silky edges, soft and new
that carry me along these fields
where egrets pick among the mud
and swallows croon from up above. 

When fading skies bid the shadows come
my melting wings, like butter from hot sun
grow weary as I seek to hide and rest
within these mellow marshes in the west. 







Written on 7/8/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/3/2020 7:25:00 PM
A beautiful, enchanting write that flows so exquisitely. I love it - God bless you :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/3/2020 9:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Regina. I’m glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 8/2/2020 2:26:00 PM
You have always been one of my favourite poets .. . Your poem took me on a lovely journey
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/2/2020 4:20:00 PM
Wow, thank you for the compliment, Silent! It goes without saying thAt you are one of my favorite ( and most talented!) poets, as well! This made my day! :)
Date: 7/12/2020 7:59:00 PM
Beautifully written, Laura. Loved this. Great job. Stay safe!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/12/2020 10:53:00 PM
Thank you, Lure! :)
Date: 7/10/2020 1:27:00 PM
Sweetly rendered, Laura. I loved the contrast between the egrets and the swallows --- as well as everything about this write! Just lovely. Thanks, Gershon
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/10/2020 6:36:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Gershon! So glad you liked this poem! :)
Date: 7/9/2020 10:52:00 PM
Your lovely poem captures the whimsical flight of the butterfly very well, with its scenic stops and starts. It's in my FAVES. :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/10/2020 9:12:00 AM
Wow, thank you, Evelyn, for faving my poem! I’m so happy you liked it.. God bless! :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/10/2020 9:07:00 AM
Wow, thank you, Evelyn, for faving my poem! I’m so happy you liked it.. God bless! :)
Date: 7/9/2020 7:33:00 AM
I can picture this butterfly fluttering from flower to flower. Beautiful imagery, Laura, I enjoyed reading this. Best of luck in the contest. John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/9/2020 5:00:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comments, John! I appreciate them! :)

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