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Floating Fields

I feel the fleeting whispers of the wind it fills my fragile wings like yellow sails to float about these mellow marshes in dawn’s light a scenic dream, setting all things right. Alight with life, I make my dizzy way among the reeds and lazily loop both high and low to drink a sip of nectar, brief or maybe a morsel of tasty leaf then land and settle underneath. This dream is bright and hopeful, too with silky edges, soft and new that carry me along these fields where egrets pick among the mud and swallows croon from up above. When fading skies bid the shadows come my melting wings, like butter from hot sun grow weary as I seek to hide and rest within these mellow marshes in the west. Written on 7/8/2020

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Date: 9/25/2020 5:32:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win. This is quite a beautiful and musical poem. Lots of rich images.
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Date: 9/3/2020 7:25:00 PM
A beautiful, enchanting write that flows so exquisitely. I love it - God bless you :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/3/2020 9:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Regina. I’m glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 8/2/2020 2:26:00 PM
You have always been one of my favourite poets .. . Your poem took me on a lovely journey
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/2/2020 4:20:00 PM
Wow, thank you for the compliment, Silent! It goes without saying thAt you are one of my favorite ( and most talented!) poets, as well! This made my day! :)
Date: 7/12/2020 7:59:00 PM
Beautifully written, Laura. Loved this. Great job. Stay safe!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/12/2020 10:53:00 PM
Thank you, Lure! :)
Date: 7/10/2020 1:27:00 PM
Sweetly rendered, Laura. I loved the contrast between the egrets and the swallows --- as well as everything about this write! Just lovely. Thanks, Gershon
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/10/2020 6:36:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Gershon! So glad you liked this poem! :)
Date: 7/9/2020 10:52:00 PM
Your lovely poem captures the whimsical flight of the butterfly very well, with its scenic stops and starts. It's in my FAVES. :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/10/2020 9:12:00 AM
Wow, thank you, Evelyn, for faving my poem! I’m so happy you liked it.. God bless! :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/10/2020 9:07:00 AM
Wow, thank you, Evelyn, for faving my poem! I’m so happy you liked it.. God bless! :)
Date: 7/9/2020 7:33:00 AM
I can picture this butterfly fluttering from flower to flower. Beautiful imagery, Laura, I enjoyed reading this. Best of luck in the contest. John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/9/2020 5:00:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comments, John! I appreciate them! :)

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