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"I'm everywhere; I'm just a soul that's floating around here on earth." Lauren Jauregui I’d love to be floating without a care - drifting to sky in a giant balloon - gliding with breezes up into the air pretending I even could touch the moon. In and out of scenes Mother Nature weaves, I’d love to be floating without a care drifting like autumn’s most colorful leaves round trees, over meadows, in skies so fair - When life gets to be more than I can bear - like twigs being carried down cool fresh streams, I’d love to be floating without a care or lifting off ground as I’ve done in some dreams. To be like birds effortlessly gliding winging my way as I live on a prayer. How nice to be on swift currents riding. I’d love to be floating without a care.

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Constance La France

Date: 10/9/2023 2:23:00 PM

Andrea, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the image and quote, Constance

Joseph May

Date: 10/2/2023 1:03:00 AM

Lovely write Andrea, Congrats on your win

Valsa George

Date: 9/28/2023 9:18:00 AM

You have imagined a quixotic situation. It will be so pleasant to float in the blue on a balloon so weightless without a care. A beautiful quatern and a well deserved win. Congratulations dear Andrea.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/28/2023 7:45:00 AM

This is so nice. I like that feeling. I have experienced it. Take care :)

Debjani Mitra

Date: 9/27/2023 5:59:00 PM

Andrea, your poems have their own special touch. This one is too good...floating made so mystic with nature ..touching the moon , yes the words touched Our Hearts too

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/27/2023 4:26:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea, on your top win! What a lovely Quatern! You have created an outstanding poetic piece with the theme "floating". Love and Hugs!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/24/2023 1:33:00 AM

What a great idea. How I miss the sea. I would float there forever. Not in sweet water though. I once tried in a pool and found it exhausting. To float in the sea is so exhilarating as you so well wrote. And how I admire the ease of rhyme when you write these poems. Hugs xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/23/2023 2:22:00 PM

I’ve tried a float tank a few times. I thought it would be claustrophobic but it was the exact opposite. The complete darkness’s made me feel like I was floating in outer space.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2023 1:01:00 PM

Wouldn't we all like that feeling/s of freedom from time to time. I hope your situation is much better now with everyone's health. I know there has been a great deal of stress on you and your whole family in the last few weeks. Thanks for sharing this one with us. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thank you for your visit to my page and the nice review of my work. Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/23/2023 12:53:00 PM

What an exquisite and soft creation! You expressed 'floating' carefree so well. I, too, would love to be floating without a care. Have a wonderful weekend, Sara Etgen-Baker

Karen Jones

Date: 9/23/2023 10:00:00 AM

Fun! It reminds me of the feelings during meditation!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/23/2023 9:59:00 AM

Wonderful. Love it. God bless you my sweet friend. You're a godsend. Love, Gina