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Flirting With Desire

a bike ride with you
tastes so much more than the thirst...
one watermelon
when together in embrace
so cool upon red hot lips.

 © Harry J Horsman 2022

Copyright © Harry Horsman | Year Posted 2022

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Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/26/2022 12:32:00 PM A lovely tanka, so carefree, romantic and happy. Evelyn Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/16/2022 2:02:00 PM A fun/cute write. Bikes, summer and watermelon all go together. I love the cool watermelon in the summer. Have a great/blessed day................ Login to Reply

Ann Foster Date: 8/2/2022 9:31:00 AM Passion... lovely... Ann Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 7/25/2022 6:09:00 AM Hi Harry, a most descriptive Tanka, that sings in its imagery and flow. A wonderful write Harry. Have a wonderful Monday ..... Mike. Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 7/22/2022 8:20:00 AM Pity this isn't for a contest Harry my friend, it sizzles even though watermelon is around. Hugs and blessings Jennifer Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/19/2022 1:44:00 PM love this. So flavorful!! Login to Reply

Yolanda Nicholsen Date: 7/18/2022 5:43:00 AM simply adored this piece lovely write Login to Reply

Brian Sambourne Date: 7/17/2022 8:52:00 PM Greetings Harry, Top notch imagery in your lines, cool like watermelon juice, hot like July heat. Congratulations! Brian Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/17/2022 7:09:00 AM Was this one for the watermelon contest? I enjoyed reading it today. Sara Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 7/16/2022 4:16:00 PM Enticing Tanka, Harry. I liked it. Bill Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/14/2022 8:04:00 PM Ooh. This is a cooooool one, Harry. Kudos, Gershon Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 7/14/2022 5:52:00 PM Has to have a name to go with the style. but the Ideal is carried. Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/14/2022 4:27:00 PM How desirable your lovely poem, my friend, Harry! Good luck! Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 7/14/2022 2:37:00 PM Oh my Harry! such a tight form, your talent is precise! Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 7/14/2022 1:47:00 PM Watermelon with a hint of romance, perfect. Good luck Harry. Tom Login to Reply

Susan Woodrow Date: 7/14/2022 1:06:00 PM very nice! :) Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 7/14/2022 10:12:00 AM Love it! Great write! Best of luck in contest! Login to Reply

Unseeking Seeker Date: 7/14/2022 7:20:00 AM Wow! So creative! Should do well in the contest Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 7/14/2022 7:18:00 AM I like how succinctly you delivered on the essence of the contest theme, Harry. Yes--so much more than thirst... Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 7/14/2022 6:35:00 AM Very nice Harry! Well done :) Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 7/14/2022 6:27:00 AM An exquisite tanka. An exciting journey that satiates thirst and voracity. Best wishes, Harry Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 7/14/2022 6:18:00 AM A sweet ride, apeasing hunger and thirst. A delectable tanka. All the best harry ! Login to Reply

Mike Gentile Date: 7/14/2022 5:12:00 AM There is something sensual about watermelon Harry and your Tanka displays that so very well! Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/14/2022 1:28:00 AM - Lovely ride ... good luck in the contest, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/14/2022 1:23:00 AM Nice one Harry. I love watermelons. Login to Reply

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