Flipped Hourglass

Running after chimeras
I realised not that
Life's most precious essence
Was being left behind

Racing against time
I strived to rule over oceans
And to have rose gardens
Blooming in their midst

And each time I would look at my portrait
I would shudder
As the painting was getting old
And little insects had even started
To nimble at it

Time was eating me up
Time was dancing joyfully over my thirst
For that which was not fated to be mine
And like an angry demon
It kept rejoicing at the pain that
Was slowly breaking me into pieces

But then
I just stopped in my race,
Looked all around me
And flipped the hourglass
Before throwing my portrait into a fire
And igniting a flame with its residue
In my very own heart

Life is not meant to be a channel to assuage
Our greedy monster growling inside of us
But life is an opportunity to make
Of our stay in this realm
One worthy of being remembered
For the way we treated others all around us

The flipped hourglass had me running backwards
To where nature was revered
And simplicity was worn as a crown
There where smiles sparkled
And trust shined on
There where I could sit
And watch waves peacefully,
Content and satisfied at the gifts that are my own due!

Written on 1st Feb 2022
For Contest Pick A Title Vol 28
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 2/22/2022 10:35:00 AM
Dear Anoucheka, Your poem is so beautiful, along with a good lesson :) Congratulations on your deserving First Place win!
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Date: 2/13/2022 7:28:00 AM
"Time was eating me up", yet, "trust shined on" - beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/13/2022 6:16:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest, Anoucheka:-) What a brilliant poem! I loved it. Congrats on winning Brian's contest as well.
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Date: 2/3/2022 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Anoucheka; Wonderful imagery. Neva
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Date: 2/3/2022 8:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win!:)
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Date: 2/2/2022 9:58:00 AM
This poem is beautifully written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading.
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