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Late November and spring rain falls the glen, dry nor-westers shed pine needle and cone - and “koork kok” crows the cock pheasant and hen who outside my window have always flown. In the thickets and hanging gardens from calls my ring-necked friend, my avian muse who, silenced by the Iroquois’s loud thrum, shines in the dappled sun its copper hues. Behold his red faced wattle in the grass, a white collared chromatic blue-green head and long tail feathers that before me pass as to the heavens his princely wings spread. For in these hills in wild and wondrous sound echo game fowl and the choppers inbound. Written: November 1994

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Date: 12/23/2024 2:11:00 AM
Keith this reminds me of the Ring neck pheasants we had in the 70's in our back fields of our house. I had a golden retriever Lester and we would go into the snowy fields and these birds would not move until you almost stepped on them and they would take off like a jet in front of you, surprising the heck out of you. They were beautiful to see. You don't see too many these days. Such a lovely sonnet incorporating the Koork kok crows and the cock pheasant mixed in with Choppers all flying marvels
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Michael Tor
Date: 12/23/2024 9:57:00 PM
lol loved your comment Keith...
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 12/23/2024 4:52:00 AM
Cheers MT. Now I’m watching for a fat dude in a sleigh inbound with my new jet ski.
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Michael Tor
Date: 12/23/2024 2:13:00 AM
your talent for writing goes back Keith. I'm finding great writes in your past poetry archive. Take care my friend, a Merry Christmas and safe and healthy New Year...
Date: 11/29/2024 10:27:00 PM
like this one - strong imagery, good ryhthm - well said
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 11/30/2024 5:55:00 AM
Cheers Mat. Glad you liked it.
Date: 11/29/2024 7:30:00 AM
Keith...nice...birds of a feather! We have some remarkable machines at our disposal as well as beautiful natural flyers.
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Date: 11/17/2024 12:00:00 PM
I enjoy your beautiful sonnet. I like the woodsy atmosphere. It is unfortunate that there isn't a single specimen of the original turkey. Sign of the times.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 11/17/2024 12:35:00 PM
Glad you liked it, Hilda. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 11/17/2024 5:48:00 AM
Excellent…you were damn good at this 30 years ago. What a gift you have, Keith.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 11/17/2024 12:33:00 PM
Hi Mark. That means a lot coming from you. Take care now.
Date: 11/16/2024 6:15:00 PM
Memories of a time gone by yet never ending...dramatic piece of poetry craft, KT of NZ (not a dingo). :o))
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Arlo Parker
Date: 11/17/2024 12:01:00 PM
Some sources have offered that theory.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 11/16/2024 6:29:00 PM
Thank you, sir. This was back when I was a Kiwi (a flightless bird as it happens). As you know I was actually born in the Chinese year of the dingo.
Date: 11/16/2024 5:21:00 PM
Nice sonnet, Beautiful bird, nothing sounds like a military chopper inbound
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 11/16/2024 5:32:00 PM
Hi Frederic. If I remember correctly you are ex-military. I lived next to a military base for many years so I heard choppers and fighter jets and transports all the time. Cheers.

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