Notes About The Poem

Pictured above is a Ring-necked Pheasant,

and below an RNZAF Iroquois helicopter.

Flightpath

Late November and spring rain falls the glen,
  dry nor-westers shed pine needle and cone -
and “koork kok” crows the cock pheasant and hen
  who outside my window have always flown.
In the thickets and hanging gardens from
  calls my ring-necked friend, my avian muse
who, silenced by the Iroquois’s loud thrum,
  shines in the dappled sun its copper hues.
Behold his red faced wattle in the grass,
  a white collared chromatic blue-green head
and long tail feathers that before me pass
  as to the heavens his princely wings spread.
For in these hills in wild and wondrous sound
echo game fowl and the choppers inbound.


             Written: November 1994
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December 23, 2024 at 2:11 AM
Keith this reminds me of the Ring neck pheasants we had in the 70's in our back fields of our house. I had a golden retriever Lester and we would go into the snowy fields and these birds would not move until you almost stepped on them and they would take off like a jet in front of you, surprising the heck out of you. They were beautiful to see. You don't see too many these days. Such a lovely sonnet incorporating the Koork kok crows and the cock pheasant mixed in with Choppers all flying marvels
Tor Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 9:57 PM
lol loved your comment Keith...
Trestrail Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 4:52 AM
Cheers MT. Now I’m watching for a fat dude in a sleigh inbound with my new jet ski.
Tor Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 2:13 AM
your talent for writing goes back Keith. I'm finding great writes in your past poetry archive. Take care my friend, a Merry Christmas and safe and healthy New Year...
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November 29, 2024 at 7:30 AM
Keith...nice...birds of a feather! We have some remarkable machines at our disposal as well as beautiful natural flyers.
Greenhough Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 12:00 PM
I enjoy your beautiful sonnet. I like the woodsy atmosphere. It is unfortunate that there isn't a single specimen of the original turkey. Sign of the times.
Trestrail Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 12:35 PM
Glad you liked it, Hilda. Thanks for stopping by.
Parker Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 6:15 PM
Memories of a time gone by yet never ending...dramatic piece of poetry craft, KT of NZ (not a dingo). :o))
Parker Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 12:01 PM
Some sources have offered that theory.
Trestrail Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 6:29 PM
Thank you, sir. This was back when I was a Kiwi (a flightless bird as it happens). As you know I was actually born in the Chinese year of the dingo.
Parker Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 5:21 PM
Nice sonnet, Beautiful bird, nothing sounds like a military chopper inbound
Trestrail Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 5:32 PM
Hi Frederic. If I remember correctly you are ex-military. I lived next to a military base for many years so I heard choppers and fighter jets and transports all the time. Cheers.
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