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Flight With An Eagle

I feel him close around me his warmth penetrates melts my fears and stirs we lift slowly quietly into the east flame greets us fire the first of the five air the second pushes against me seeking entrance into my lungs fills me with the scents of a thousand mornings but none like this since the dawn of time below water the third blue the first created myriad moods swell reach up then falls back into itself sing the songs of Yemaya he breathes deeply and soars my arms safe surround we dive to white caps playing now earth the fourth greens to boggle my senses then brown of camel humped desert dunes wander nomadic before the winds buries civilizations exposes ancient bones sprawling cities insignificant as we soar again higher and higher still past the crags of Qomolangma mother goddess of the earth his heart beats calmly against my breast this Eagleman who carries me as we leave the earth through mountain corridors ranged like pillars at the entrance of Valhalla the world shrinks into a pin dot poked through a sheet of the blackest before here the old ones dwell the people of the sky last is spirit the fifth direction he has shown me all that is and now what is to come

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Date: 10/18/2017 8:54:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Have a nice day.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/18/2017 9:16:00 AM
Thank you. Welcome to my home.
Date: 9/24/2017 2:51:00 PM
Fantastic imagery in this piece Patricia, enjoyed the read, such an adventurous flight.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/24/2017 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Craig.
Date: 9/24/2017 10:57:00 AM
"then brown of camel humped desert dunes wander nomadic before the winds", is gorgeous. Great write.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/24/2017 3:41:00 PM
Thanks Dale I am glad you enjoyed.
Date: 9/24/2017 7:55:00 AM
Wow, I love the lines, "...the world shrinks into a pin dot/poked through a sheet of the blackest before..." those lines surely stated a lot of where you were heading! this was a very descriptive write, one that I will read again many times as I really love it! I will enjoy this incredible poem all this morning as it is quite a beautiful one! What a brilliant piece, Great Work my friend!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/24/2017 8:48:00 AM
Russell I am so glad you like this piece. I hope enjoy it until your eyes wear it off the page. How is Emma say hi to her for me.
Date: 9/24/2017 6:25:00 AM
Errrrr...WOW!! Pretty heady stuff, Patricia - Truly impressed! Love the way each verse runs into the following...great bit of poetry...a delight to read. Intrigued to know of what inspired it? All my very warmest regards as always, Patricia. :) john
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John Fleming
Date: 9/24/2017 3:29:00 PM
Yes indeed! That would be very nice, Patricia - look forward to reading about it! :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/24/2017 8:41:00 AM
Thank you for liking my poem I loved writing it. It is a rather long story so I will send it in soup mail if you would like.

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