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Flight With An Eagle

I feel him close around me
his warmth penetrates 
melts my fears and stirs
we lift slowly quietly into the east 
flame greets us
fire the first of the five

air the second 
pushes against me
seeking entrance into my lungs
fills me with the scents 
of a thousand mornings
but none like this
since the dawn of time

below water the third
blue the first created 
myriad moods swell reach up
then falls back into itself
sing the songs of Yemaya
he breathes deeply and soars
my arms safe surround 
we dive to white caps playing

now earth the fourth
greens to boggle my senses
then brown of camel humped desert 
dunes wander nomadic before the winds
buries civilizations exposes ancient bones
sprawling cities insignificant
as we soar again higher and higher still
past the crags of Qomolangma
mother goddess of the earth

his heart beats calmly against my breast
this Eagleman who carries me
as we leave the earth through 
mountain corridors ranged like pillars
at the entrance of Valhalla
the world shrinks into a pin dot
poked through a sheet of the blackest before
here the old ones dwell the people of the sky
last is spirit the fifth direction
he has shown me all that is and now
what is to come

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/18/2017 8:54:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Have a nice day.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/18/2017 9:16:00 AM
Thank you. Welcome to my home.
Date: 9/24/2017 2:51:00 PM
Fantastic imagery in this piece Patricia, enjoyed the read, such an adventurous flight.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/24/2017 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Craig.
Date: 9/24/2017 10:57:00 AM
"then brown of camel humped desert dunes wander nomadic before the winds", is gorgeous. Great write.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/24/2017 3:41:00 PM
Thanks Dale I am glad you enjoyed.
Date: 9/24/2017 7:55:00 AM
Wow, I love the lines, "...the world shrinks into a pin dot/poked through a sheet of the blackest before..." those lines surely stated a lot of where you were heading! this was a very descriptive write, one that I will read again many times as I really love it! I will enjoy this incredible poem all this morning as it is quite a beautiful one! What a brilliant piece, Great Work my friend!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/24/2017 8:48:00 AM
Russell I am so glad you like this piece. I hope enjoy it until your eyes wear it off the page. How is Emma say hi to her for me.
Date: 9/24/2017 6:25:00 AM
Errrrr...WOW!! Pretty heady stuff, Patricia - Truly impressed! Love the way each verse runs into the following...great bit of poetry...a delight to read. Intrigued to know of what inspired it? All my very warmest regards as always, Patricia. :) john
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John Fleming
Date: 9/24/2017 3:29:00 PM
Yes indeed! That would be very nice, Patricia - look forward to reading about it! :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/24/2017 8:41:00 AM
Thank you for liking my poem I loved writing it. It is a rather long story so I will send it in soup mail if you would like.

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