Flight of Icarus

With wax and feathers 
Strapped to his arms,
Icarus took flight like a bird,
Escaping Crete,
The labyrinth far below.

Forgetting his father’s advice,
Feeling freedom,
Like a moth to a light,
He soared towards the sun.

The wax melted and he moulted,
Then down he plummeted,
To the ocean below,
Where the waves washed over his corpse.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 6, 2011 at 6:19 PM
What a sad tale. But a lesson for those who refuse to learn from the experience of others. Great job. God Bless, JB
Neels Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 12:42 PM
I really enjoyed this one Jack, you have this cool way of bringing your point across ;-) lfde Wilma
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September 2, 2011 at 11:09 AM
not heeding parent's advice holds true even to today Jack..nicely penned with full visual effect my friend.. a fascinating tale too.. so true..in lore luv..
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 1:54 AM
Good summary of the tale. I have a sonnet on this one myself! One day I should post it. It's quite the story, isn't it? One of my favorite old legends, this one is, well described by you.
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September 1, 2011 at 2:34 PM
Wow, quite the story! I think there's a lesson here to be learned! Don't fly too close to the sun in rickety bird wings!! Great write!!
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