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Flight

Rushing wind as birds take flight, spirits soaring high, fear defeats my flight. Inspired by Raul Moreno's contest

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/24/2010 6:27:00 AM

Wow, Doris, a remarkable Monoku! Enjoyed reading it! Have a nice sunday and thanks for your comments...Gert

Rachel W

Date: 4/13/2010 6:33:00 PM

Very neat, Doris!

Skat A

Date: 4/9/2010 7:34:00 PM

wow !doris I read the poem . Yes it does look like the picture. and oh my Gosh . some one needs a spank. that is crazy . that she is crazy . I do not like little one to use them kind of words . she should just be happy u comment her. your comment is worst than mine. sorry i did not use caps. i am trying to finish this type fast. you are cool in my boook.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/9/2010 7:19:00 PM

ouch! harsh comments....this is not the soup I know... or want to.....your ok in my book! Doris! peace, love and harmony is all I seek on the soup......I get enough of harshness on life's hard surface....here i SEEK PEACE....much love, jimbo...pss...fine haiku!!!

Jay Loveless

Date: 4/9/2010 9:30:00 AM

p.friggin.s this is a nice poem

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/9/2010 6:06:00 AM

Another great write, for greatness will always produce what is great. One love and all the best

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2010 4:28:00 AM

Way to go...A sure winner...Your mother surprised you huh!...Mom

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/8/2010 9:49:00 PM

nice one

Mitch White

Date: 4/8/2010 5:18:00 PM

Very different take on birds, I enjoyed it

Royal Trevino

Date: 4/8/2010 4:59:00 PM

ha cool write:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/8/2010 4:39:00 PM

Cool way of setting this Haiku up .. it has to read Haiku for the contest Doris.. your words also fit Haiku if u break it up into 3 lines... my entry is also title the same.. good luck ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Phil Boy

Date: 4/8/2010 4:38:00 PM

I see long comments. Is it okay . If I just say. This is cool.