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Flickering Light

The candle burns with heat at night
Peaceful flame of flickering light
All worries melt with restful sight
Erased by new dreams of delight

A scent remains, things are alright
A calming moment can bring might
From flame within that does ignite
Within the soul that wants things right

Heidi Sands

1/14/21

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Alexis Y. Date: 1/19/2021 7:16:00 AM Hi Heidi, What a well-written motorhome. I enjoyed the image you created. It had such a peaceful and tranquil tone and vibe as well. I’m glad I read this today. Have a great day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/19/2021 2:17:00 PM I am happy to hear that Alexis. Thank you for taking the time to comment and let me know :)

Quoth Theraven Date: 1/16/2021 10:23:00 AM Heidi, Drawn to your poem's flickering light, like a Monorhyme moth. -Richard Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 1/19/2021 7:48:00 PM It's nice to see your poems. Back to work so I'm on here less. But I'll always drop by to see what adventures you put in a poem. -Richard Heidi Sands Date: 1/16/2021 10:40:00 AM lol. Thank you very much Richard. It is nice to see your comments :)

Eve Roper Date: 1/15/2021 7:21:00 AM Staring a flickering light is very soothing a hypnotizement. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/16/2021 6:25:00 AM I really enjoy watching the candle flicker through a holder that it is in. I am happy that you enjoyed this Eve. Thank you. Hugs :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/14/2021 8:14:00 PM Just beautiful, Heidi. Your lines appeal to my senses, and the images are as fresh as new-fallen snow. Superb poesy. Thank you, Gershon Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/16/2021 6:24:00 AM Hi Gershon. I am happy to hear that. Thank you very much. I hope all is well. Have a nice day :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2021 8:18:00 AM - Words that warm on a cold winter day, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/14/2021 9:09:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. I am happy to hear that. hugs :)

Jan Allison Date: 1/14/2021 6:30:00 AM such an uplifting poem just what we need during these dark times Heidi:-) hope you are fully recovered:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/14/2021 8:30:00 AM Hi Jan. I am happy to hear this was uplifting for you. That brings me a smile :) Yes, I am recovered, thank you! hugs :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/14/2021 5:38:00 AM When soothing flame of light burns within, all mundane vanishes. Beautifully uplifting poem, Heidi. Enjoyed the tone and flow. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/14/2021 8:27:00 AM Hi Vijay. I am happy to hear you enjoyed this. Thank you for your kind feedback. I hope you have a nice day :)