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Flickering Light

The candle burns with heat at night Peaceful flame of flickering light All worries melt with restful sight Erased by new dreams of delight A scent remains, things are alright A calming moment can bring might From flame within that does ignite Within the soul that wants things right Heidi Sands 1/14/21

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Alexis Y.

Date: 1/19/2021 7:16:00 AM

Hi Heidi, What a well-written motorhome. I enjoyed the image you created. It had such a peaceful and tranquil tone and vibe as well. I’m glad I read this today. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2021 2:17:00 PM

I am happy to hear that Alexis. Thank you for taking the time to comment and let me know :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/16/2021 10:23:00 AM

Heidi, Drawn to your poem's flickering light, like a Monorhyme moth. -Richard

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/19/2021 7:48:00 PM

It's nice to see your poems. Back to work so I'm on here less. But I'll always drop by to see what adventures you put in a poem. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2021 10:40:00 AM

lol. Thank you very much Richard. It is nice to see your comments :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/15/2021 7:21:00 AM

Staring a flickering light is very soothing a hypnotizement. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2021 6:25:00 AM

I really enjoy watching the candle flicker through a holder that it is in. I am happy that you enjoyed this Eve. Thank you. Hugs :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/14/2021 8:14:00 PM

Just beautiful, Heidi. Your lines appeal to my senses, and the images are as fresh as new-fallen snow. Superb poesy. Thank you, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2021 6:24:00 AM

Hi Gershon. I am happy to hear that. Thank you very much. I hope all is well. Have a nice day :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2021 8:18:00 AM

- Words that warm on a cold winter day, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2021 9:09:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. I am happy to hear that. hugs :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2021 6:30:00 AM

such an uplifting poem just what we need during these dark times Heidi:-) hope you are fully recovered:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2021 8:30:00 AM

Hi Jan. I am happy to hear this was uplifting for you. That brings me a smile :) Yes, I am recovered, thank you! hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/14/2021 5:38:00 AM

When soothing flame of light burns within, all mundane vanishes. Beautifully uplifting poem, Heidi. Enjoyed the tone and flow.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2021 8:27:00 AM

Hi Vijay. I am happy to hear you enjoyed this. Thank you for your kind feedback. I hope you have a nice day :)