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Flickering Cloud

fluttered by autumn the leaves of my window tree gave up summer’s ghost and in one flickering cloud fell simultaneously by gail

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Date: 9/27/2016 11:58:00 PM
Wow, I don't think I could ever do a tanka. A lot of thought must have went into this Gail
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Date: 2/1/2016 12:19:00 PM
Gail, deep imagery, thanks for sharing. ** SKAT
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Gail Foster
Date: 2/1/2016 4:04:00 PM
Thank you for commenting, SKAT, so glad that you enjoyed it!

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