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Flickering

• Come to me O breath of life in silent room of flowered vase with delicate cracks and age defined the oaken floors worn of time I find this place of two immersed near crackling warmth of subtle hues a place where time has come to slow and winter's wrath of purity bestow Come to me O breath of life to hold one moment in fire light... •

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/29/2012 11:36:00 AM
Great poem like the style especially
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Date: 5/10/2012 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Rick. Well Done, hugs, deb
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Date: 5/9/2012 8:35:00 PM
This is an awesome moment paused in time, Rick. A well deserved top win. Congrats.
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Date: 5/9/2012 6:39:00 PM
Very beautiful Rick! Congratulations on your much deserved win ...Samia
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Date: 5/9/2012 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this awesome poem! Lori
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Date: 5/9/2012 3:25:00 PM
Just lovely...ah if I only could! ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/9/2012 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations, Rick.
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Date: 5/9/2012 7:12:00 AM
Congrats Rick,
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Date: 5/9/2012 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "175" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2012 12:47:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I will be back Monday to read some more. Wishing you a weekend full of love and joy and much much inspiration in your writing endeavors ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2012 12:39:00 PM
So beautiful written Rick....Beautiful !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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