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Flicker, Fork

... and flash of light dart across dark this night. Zigzag ozone, maze of blaze. Voltage image, eye displays. Faster than the reflex flicks. Through the lens, fine focus fix. On optic cell, it there etch, then to the brain, lightning sketch. Seconds on, rumbles arrive. Pale percussion, half alive, mumble rumble to its fate. Thunderstorm thus dissipate.

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Date: 11/22/2021 2:31:00 PM
Vividly descriptive piece on the power of nature, Tony! Janice
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 11/26/2021 2:36:00 PM
Many thanks Janice. I'm impressed by thunderstorms. They say to us that Mother Nature will teach us a trick or two. Tony.
Date: 9/28/2021 12:18:00 PM
I love to see a thunderstorm in all its glory, you've captured it well Tony. Tom
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 10/7/2021 11:06:00 AM
Tom, many thanks for comment. Yes, I love to watch a thunderstorm and know the power of nature. Tony.

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