Fleeing Irma

FLEEING IRMA

spotlight moon, full, like an Old Testament cloud, leading
Floridians forth, not into the desert, but away from the wrath
of Irma.  bumper to bumper, neighbors from pilot to caboose,
illuminated in each other’s flood beams. testiness and pride
put aside, as fleeing cars, in camaraderie, brave the calm
before the storm. like the Israelites, they leave behind the
homes they know, put themselves in the hands of God. many
have family and friends north of their beloved peninsula,
an unintended visit, a warm haven, not a picnic nor a vacation,
but each pulls themselves up, for our Southern neighbors
are not of the craven sort. those who choose to live near the sea,
with its beauty and fortitude, know how to batten down the hatches.
hammocks left behind will tangle, and hug palm trees, suffering
the loss of their occupants. hotels, with never ending vacationers,
takes a much needed rest. God believes in rest, sometimes
a seven year sabbath, even when the soul forgets its place. we
pray, even north of the path, in stillness, we must, in gratitude,
never taking for granted, lest we too find ourselves seeking solace
elsewhere. godspeed our tanned Peninsula friends. godspeed
and bless, with safety, tenacity, and love as we reel you in.

9/8/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Williams Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 11:37 PM
Congratulations on POTD Kim, so deserving on an awesome poem. Terrifying times though ...Maria
B. Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 10:15 PM
Congratulations on receiving POTD! My thoughts and prayers go out to all whom are affected by this disaster.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 10:20 PM
Thank you! Hopefully all will be well.
Mcgrath Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 5:41 PM
Congratulations Kim on POTD. It is written beautifully, describing such a sad and terrifying time!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Thanks, Brenda! Yes, indeed scary!
Allison Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 3:35 PM
Many congratulations on POTD kim a very timely theme:-( hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 4:22 PM
Thanks, Jan XX
Ibeh Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Congrats on POTD, Kim! So glad you're now in a safe place. God willing all Floridians will survive the wrath of Irma. Take care*Hugs*
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 1:21 PM
Thanks, Edward! I was witness to the Floridian exodus. Hopefully here in Georgia we won't get the brunt of the storm. I do pray for those affected by the storm path. Praying for all and especially friends and family.
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations, Kim, on POTD ~`*
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 1:03 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Warrior Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 11:45 AM
Congrats!!! my friend on a sad POTD...hopefully all shall be safe...god bless to all concerned...^WW^
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 11:50 AM
Thank you! I know! I've never seen such a "caravan" God bless and keep them all! <3 Kim
Cozart Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 10:37 AM
Congrats on potd, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 11:24 AM
Thanks, Dale!
Wanter Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 10:07 AM
Timely, of course, and beautifully written both realistically and encouraging.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 11:25 AM
Thanks, Sunlite!
Smith Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Well written Kim, congratulations on POTD honors...
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 11:26 AM
Thanks, Charlie!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 7:34 AM
This is so wonderfully written Kim, a timely piece, a blessing, compassion, lovely to read you this potd this morning :) xomo!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 8:13 AM
Thanks, Maureen!
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 7:07 AM
- A terrible natural catastrophe, Kim - Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 8:14 AM
For sure! So much disaster! Thank you. Kim <3
Pandit Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 6:39 AM
Congrats Kim--lovely piece and POTD as well!!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 8:14 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Capitano Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 5:44 AM
Way to go Kim for this treasure and POTD. This is such a devastating storm it is hard to imagine.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 8:15 AM
I know! Watching these reporters! Nuts! Thanks, Phil!
One Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 5:07 AM
I have friends in Florida, this is s horrific timr. You have written an excellent poem. Congrats on POTD
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 8:17 AM
Thank you, Silent! I know many in Florida too! Some are here in Georgia! My sis's in-law is worried. Her home is on the West coast of Florida. :(
White Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 2:19 AM
I am also hoping my friends are safe... Great poem Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 8:19 AM
Prayers for Florida! My brother just moved out of Tampa a few months ago. Thanks, Darren! <3
Pett Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 4:28 PM
This is so well written Kim, as you my thoughts are with the poor people experiencing this awful disaster.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 4:32 PM
Absolutely! Thanks, Roy!
Cozart Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 11:42 AM
This is gorgeous and moving! Fave
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 4:08 PM
Thanks, Dale!
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