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Flaws Vs Flawless

FLAWS Tinny insects on skin lines Red dragons on soul signs. Nature's insticts to human reply This earthen step will never fly. FLAWLESS Flawless is the dream that rests Beneath the purity of an endless quest. As faith lies on hands of gold Divine and earthly world their coupling unfold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 5:26:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement Valeria, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest, Valerie!
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Date: 2/5/2011 5:04:00 AM
Many congratulations Valeria on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:39:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:16:00 PM
Very pretty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in these two pairs of couplets.
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:41:00 AM
Hi Valeria - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:20:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Valeria. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, valeria
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:38:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, dear Valeria. Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:52:00 AM
Congrats Valeria on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write .. enjoy a sweet victory with luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:50:00 AM
Do you know, this is a most beautiful poem. So much to ponder; and certainly one to treasure and re-read. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Excellent writing. Best wishes. Deb
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:58:00 AM
VALERIE,~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat
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Date: 1/20/2011 6:25:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Valeria. The best to you in the contest. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:43:00 AM
What a fine expressions with good images on both the flaws and flawless, valeria
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Date: 1/19/2011 3:42:00 PM
Cool entry Valeria, the best of luck in the contest,..p.d.
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