Valeria Iliadou Poet Couplet

Flaws Vs Flawless

FLAWS
Tinny insects on skin lines
Red dragons on soul signs.

Nature's insticts to human reply
This earthen step will never fly.

                 FLAWLESS
Flawless is the dream that rests
Beneath the purity of an endless quest.

As faith lies on hands of gold
Divine and earthly world their coupling unfold.

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 23, 2011 at 5:26 AM A belated congratulations on your placement Valeria, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2011 at 4:15 PM Congratulations in the contest, Valerie!

James Fraser February 5, 2011 at 5:04 AM Many congratulations Valeria on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)

Poet Destroyer A February 4, 2011 at 10:39 PM CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.

Joyce Johnson February 4, 2011 at 7:16 PM Very pretty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick February 4, 2011 at 4:41 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Robert Pettit February 4, 2011 at 4:38 PM Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in these two pairs of couplets.

Kory Calhoun February 4, 2011 at 11:41 AM Hi Valeria - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC

Ralph Taylor February 4, 2011 at 11:20 AM Congrats on a well deserved win, Valeria. Nice going. xxxRalph

Dr.Ram Mehta February 4, 2011 at 10:12 AM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, valeria

Elaine George February 4, 2011 at 8:38 AM Many congrats on your win, dear Valeria. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 4, 2011 at 6:52 AM Congrats Valeria on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write .. enjoy a sweet victory with luv..

Deb Radke February 4, 2011 at 6:50 AM Do you know, this is a most beautiful poem. So much to ponder; and certainly one to treasure and re-read. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Excellent writing. Best wishes. Deb

Skat A February 4, 2011 at 12:58 AM VALERIE,~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat

Carol Sunshine Brown January 20, 2011 at 6:25 AM I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Valeria. The best to you in the contest. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta January 20, 2011 at 3:43 AM What a fine expressions with good images on both the flaws and flawless, valeria

Poet Destroyer A January 19, 2011 at 3:42 PM Cool entry Valeria, the best of luck in the contest,..p.d.