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Flawless Or Flaws

Flawless Her skin shone with radiance Peach and rose in perfect balance Flawless as the diamond on her hand A sparkling jewel on a gold band A black heart rested within Ominously jet, a flawless twin Flaws Pretty she was not, had many a flaw Chubby cheeks which needed a thaw Fingers hardened with hard work Was a simple wife of the town clerk A kind and golden heart within Helped one and all with a happy grin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 5:01:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement Tahera, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 3:52:00 PM
I think I read this one before and I like it just as much the second time. Very happy to see you on the list. Congratulations, Tahera. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/6/2011 1:26:00 PM
guess these are interchangable hats depending on what one wants from life? aye? GREAT to see you winning BIG! Light & Love
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Date: 2/5/2011 4:31:00 AM
Many congratulations Tahera on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:28:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) T.M.~on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:53:00 PM
Good work Tahera. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:31:00 PM
Congratulaions on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this double entry of couplets.
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:18:00 PM
Loved this sweet poem So glad to see your poem in the winners' circle,!! Congratulations, Tahera! love Carrie !
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:23:00 AM
Hi Tahera - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:47:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Tahera. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Tahera
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:16:00 AM
Beautiful, dear Tahera. Congrat's on your well deserved win. Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:36:00 AM
Congrats Tahera my friend on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write .. enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:26:00 AM
Oh Tahera, this is most excellent writing and gives one pause as to the outward 'flawless' appearance. Congratulations on your winning position in the contest. Most deserved. Love, Deb
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Date: 2/3/2011 11:52:00 PM
TAHERA~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat
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Date: 1/29/2011 5:40:00 PM
Looks like you did contrasting people too with your entry. I enjoyed reading these. Good luck in the contest, Tahera. LUv Andrea
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Date: 1/20/2011 10:30:00 AM
A wonderful entry for the contest. I enjoyed the read. Good luck. Caryl
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Date: 1/18/2011 5:24:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Tahera. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today and I hope you will continue to write and write and write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol
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