Alan S Poet Couplet

Flawless

FLAWLESS

She had very long, silky blonde hair
That blew in the wind without a care
She was scantily clad, 
That made me glad,
‘Cause I could see her underwear
Her smile was oh so bright,
So radiant it could light up the night
When I look at her now,
It’s impossible to frown,
Oh my....My pants feel tight.

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 23, 2011 at 5:23 AM A belated congratulations on your placement Alan, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2011 at 4:11 PM hahaha. So where is the flawed part? Is that you in your pants? heehee. VERY good humorous poem. a highest rating for this one! Luv, Andrea

James Fraser February 5, 2011 at 5:03 AM Many congratulations Alan on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)

Poet Destroyer A February 4, 2011 at 10:37 PM CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick February 4, 2011 at 4:39 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Robert Pettit February 4, 2011 at 4:33 PM Nice double limerick. Congratulations on winning with this entry.

Kory Calhoun February 4, 2011 at 11:37 AM Hi Alan - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC

Ralph Taylor February 4, 2011 at 11:15 AM Congrats on a well deserved win, Alan. Nice going. Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta February 4, 2011 at 10:10 AM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Alan

Elaine George February 4, 2011 at 8:33 AM lol! Congrats on your well deserved win, dear Alan. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 4, 2011 at 6:49 AM Congrats Alan on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write luv.. enjoy your top ten success..with luv..

Skat A February 4, 2011 at 12:54 AM ALAN~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat

Duncan Chappell January 24, 2011 at 5:03 PM very nice