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Flawless

FLAWLESS She had very long, silky blonde hair That blew in the wind without a care She was scantily clad, That made me glad, ‘Cause I could see her underwear Her smile was oh so bright, So radiant it could light up the night When I look at her now, It’s impossible to frown, Oh my....My pants feel tight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 5:23:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement Alan, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 4:11:00 PM
hahaha. So where is the flawed part? Is that you in your pants? heehee. VERY good humorous poem. a highest rating for this one! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/5/2011 5:03:00 AM
Many congratulations Alan on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:37:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:33:00 PM
Nice double limerick. Congratulations on winning with this entry.
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:37:00 AM
Hi Alan - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:15:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Alan. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Alan
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:33:00 AM
lol! Congrats on your well deserved win, dear Alan. Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:49:00 AM
Congrats Alan on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write luv.. enjoy your top ten success..with luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:54:00 AM
ALAN~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat
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Date: 1/24/2011 5:03:00 PM
very nice
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