Flawed Souls

Not in the grandeur of regrets
Is satisfaction felt
In sinking heat of wet sunsets

Drunk on the penitent's dry wine
Spirits of Van Gogh left
In blues, anonymously signed

Frigid water was mine to row
Unseen at the flood's end
A black hole bringing a rainbow

Devoid of friend or tribe or peer
I found, in you, my home
And faith in love that outlasts fear

As isolation's bitter darks
Melted to your warm kiss
Hope opened like wings of monarchs

The heart that lives in you can see
Past these wounded walls to
Love the flawed soul that lives in me.

10/23/20

Writing Contest - Tercet
Sponsor: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 7:53 AM
Michelle, congratulations on your win in my Tercet Challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
Roper Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 12:11 AM
Congratulations on your win, Michelle. Hugs Eve
Fowler Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on the win Michelle! Linda
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 11:12 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Koplin Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 10:50 AM
Well done, congrats on your win!!
Pandit Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 6:16 AM
Measured words, fitting the tenor ever so perfectly. Brilliant write, as always, Michelle.
Watt Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 4:18 PM
Striking imagery in this. I really like "A black hole bringing a rainbow" and "hope opened like wings of monarchs". I am always drawn to humble love poems and this one is 'flawless'.
Crabtree Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 3:09 PM
A beautiful poem, well-written, Michelle.This should be an easy win in the contest. :)
Y. Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 2:18 PM
Hi Michelle, You penned a good entry for the contest them. You did justice to the Tercet form. I found this poem sad but heartfelt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 2:17 PM
brilliant! particularly the last three lines!! All the best in the contest!
Leffanta Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 1:54 PM
Flawed? How dare you criticize God's handiwork? You are "Special"! Aloha! Rico
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