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Flawed Souls

Not in the grandeur of regrets Is satisfaction felt In sinking heat of wet sunsets Drunk on the penitent's dry wine Spirits of Van Gogh left In blues, anonymously signed Frigid water was mine to row Unseen at the flood's end A black hole bringing a rainbow Devoid of friend or tribe or peer I found, in you, my home And faith in love that outlasts fear As isolation's bitter darks Melted to your warm kiss Hope opened like wings of monarchs The heart that lives in you can see Past these wounded walls to Love the flawed soul that lives in me. 10/23/20 Writing Contest - Tercet Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 11/1/2020 7:53:00 AM
Michelle, congratulations on your win in my Tercet Challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 11/1/2020 12:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Michelle. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/31/2020 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on the win Michelle! Linda
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Date: 10/31/2020 11:12:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/31/2020 10:50:00 AM
Well done, congrats on your win!!
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Date: 10/24/2020 6:16:00 AM
Measured words, fitting the tenor ever so perfectly. Brilliant write, as always, Michelle.
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Date: 10/23/2020 4:18:00 PM
Striking imagery in this. I really like "A black hole bringing a rainbow" and "hope opened like wings of monarchs". I am always drawn to humble love poems and this one is 'flawless'.
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Date: 10/23/2020 3:09:00 PM
A beautiful poem, well-written, Michelle.This should be an easy win in the contest. :)
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Date: 10/23/2020 2:18:00 PM
Hi Michelle, You penned a good entry for the contest them. You did justice to the Tercet form. I found this poem sad but heartfelt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/23/2020 2:17:00 PM
brilliant! particularly the last three lines!! All the best in the contest!
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Date: 10/23/2020 1:54:00 PM
Flawed? How dare you criticize God's handiwork? You are "Special"! Aloha! Rico
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