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Radiant and lovely she sits. Her lips curved into a sensual smile. Calm stillness poetic form, Her heart beats with passion, A breath, among Arden flowers. I could see the façade behind the mask; Absolutely beautiful in the lamplight In suffering lull, torn innermost, Emotions, she's cracked and broken Creating an illusion of perfection, Covers the imperfect to ignite an image Of flawlessness; not flawed, a vase of sunlight. 6/21/2021 Writing Prompt - Flawed - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 6/25/2021 4:39:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Flawed _ Challenge with your excellent poem. Great use of the required words, love _Constance
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Date: 6/24/2021 8:55:00 PM
Flawed perfection … must remember this idea! Superb write, Eve, congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/24/2021 8:35:00 PM
Very beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/24/2021 7:16:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent, and this piece showing reality in paradox (flawed perfection) written in your amazing poetic style is a proof. God bless you.
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Date: 6/24/2021 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations, beautiful!
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Date: 6/21/2021 7:15:00 AM
Well written Eve. I think it is a safe assumption to say that we all wear mask to conceal something. Good luck:)
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Date: 6/21/2021 4:04:00 AM
Many live like that wonderful take on contest theme Eve. All the best. Have a great day ahead friend
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Date: 6/21/2021 1:12:00 AM
You combined those words with a cute poem. Best for a win. Hugs.
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