Flavors of Her Essence

A woman's soul, is it as porous as the air that breaks the water and earth apart from each other? In the slither of liquid contours, this maiden's essence blows into tiny glints of filling days’ silent pages without having to fill in the blanks. But such fire in her navel; swelling, leaping forth unto a black dahlia of night dripping with all the kerosene stars like a tigress on a hidden, sensuous prowl... This is her shape. Then coming from metal gut, she fumes of musky-flavored energy, steaming the brain for a war of poker in a den filled with invincible men as she raises the bets for a royal flush of aces... This is her bullish time. Yet, curling into late evening she enters into the pillows of her soul rinsed from the bouquet and incense of a dulcet day, her bosom of long breaths warming the lamp gentle, temperate, and mild in peace, coasting along the ledge of her swan sleep... This is her soul's time, shape and peace. For Laura Loo's Second Place Challenge Resubmitted 6/27/2016 ----------- Place 2nd in the Contest:The Scent Of Your Soul Judged 10/18/2014
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Kimathi Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 9:04 AM
I love the feminine shape of your poem. It's as though it's alive!! Congrats Nette, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Devnath  Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 11:10 AM
Congrats on your win my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
Scars Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 10:18 AM
Nette, beautifully expressed wonderful flow lady, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
A   Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 10:10 PM
Nette, congrats on your best poem. Love LINDA
A  Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:36 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
Delaney Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 3:26 PM
Such a sensual feast of words. Truly a winning write, Congratulations, Nette. A definite 7. Hugs, SuZ
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:40 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Nette you captured a woman's aura so so well:-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 12:20 PM
superb Nette congrats on placing hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 7:59 PM
Congrats on ur winning awesome magnificent write Nette!
Haight Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 6:45 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win for your amazing poem! There is so much there to absorb and enjoy. Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 2:48 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem with this amazingly creative free verse masterpiece of a woman soul.
Callus Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 12:27 PM
Congratulations, Nette. Your knowledge of the female body, mind and soul is lavishly spread out in this beautiful expression of free verse. Very worthy of the high placing awarded! Immensely enjoyed. // paul
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 3:17 AM
Incredible free verse with outstanding imagery Nette. Many congrats on your win Hugs jan xxxx
Trichet Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 2:27 AM
Extraordinary Nette! Your words have the ability to take people places where they have never been before, but will to go again, and again...again. Congratulations
Walker  Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Congratulations Nette on your high marks in the contest. This is such a beautifully crafted piece. Verlena
Kayode Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 11:42 PM
Congrats Nette for a well deserved victory,it does not start today,poetry in your DNA and the more I read your work the better I appreciate your. Like an heir,I have my share of your victory because I learn from you.Congrats again. Hugs...
Yvonne Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 8:05 PM
Congratulations Nette I knew this one would rate high. A well deserved win.
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 5:03 AM
Unusual descriptive language used in this one..Our soul(mind, will, and emotion) can be shaped daily or set in a hardened bitter mold..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 3:53 AM
Wow nette well depicted best of hers! His best creation beyond any doubts! perfect write my friend!
Casto Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 12:40 AM
Darn, Nette, I may have a bit of chauvinistic streaks but a woman such as this beguiles me no end. I see behind every man, a woman guiding lovingly,I see a world falling completely off its axis without the discerning sensitivities of a female. You poem caught me off-guard with its captivating portrait of a woman in all her glory. Whew, faving this!
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 12:09 AM
wow, Nette. You are at your best doing this kind of free verse. Just marvelous.
Onna Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 3:27 PM
I see that more male poets can relate to this elegant poem. Nette, a magnificent delight to indulge in your metaphors with was fluent diction and refreshing images. A woman is undefined mystery; you seem to be comfortable in your own skin. Bravo!
Mara Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Precious gem sparkling through the real spirit of a woman's aura--- the sexuality, power, and gentleness all wrapped in this treasure box of poetry. I feel my own soul embracing this classic read.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 2:47 PM
This marvel, this masterpiece of creation, this woman no man can ever descend that deep in her soul as to see her wealth of feelings! Beautifully done! Excellent, dear Nette!
Fraser Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 2:45 PM
Like an Asp, I'm tasting the air for her essence to flavour her taste. Incredible imagery throughout Nette, nice one, James :)
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