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first springy cute rose like the odd first light of day the dawn flavor feel

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Date: 8/28/2023 6:03:00 AM
Creative haiku
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Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 8/28/2023 10:43:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 8/27/2023 6:54:00 PM
Unique!
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Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 8/28/2023 3:33:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 8/27/2023 8:51:00 AM
Great imagery in your Haiku. It has been so hot around here the flowers just don't have the energy to bloom.
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Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 8/27/2023 6:44:00 PM
Few days and we shall be in fall season. I hope we see a great spring after autumn. So hot around here too :) Thanks! Have a nice day.

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