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One Chinese lantern Courted to her heart’s delight By a thousand moths

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/29/2017 8:18:00 PM

Your sweet, whimsical and romantic light does shine in this Haiku Paul. The imagery is so charming, imaginative and tactile. I can feel the soft flutters of a thousand pair of silken wings as I read your glorious poem. Beautifully breathtaking.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 11/30/2017 11:19:00 AM

As usual your comments are lovely and with a poetic texture, Susan. Thank you very much. ~ Warm regards // paul

Julia Ward

Date: 3/20/2015 10:47:00 AM

Your haiku gives me a lovely visual! Hugs, Julia, xx

Paul Callus
Date: 3/20/2015 12:46:00 PM

Pleased that you enjoyed, Julia! Thank you! Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/21/2014 6:54:00 AM

sweet sweet however i remember one story about a moth beguiled to a candlelight. :O.. maybe be i misunderstood.. :O imagery is beautiful though :)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/21/2014 7:49:00 AM

Hi Olive_eloi! Thank you for your comments. Many moths are beguiled by flames and fail to take heed of the dangers that exist. / paul

Robin Davis

Date: 3/30/2014 3:32:00 PM

Paul Lots of meaning in so few words. Thanks for the great comment on my Shot Away Dreams poem.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/30/2014 3:44:00 PM

Hi Robin, thanks; glad you like it; be free to visit anytime. // paul

David Mohn

Date: 3/16/2014 7:48:00 PM

I love this Paul...thanks for the comment on my Haiku earlier - Dave

Paul Callus
Date: 3/17/2014 7:32:00 AM

And thank you for yours :) cu around Dave. // paul

Judith Angell Meyer

Date: 3/15/2014 1:16:00 PM

I'd say your Haiku fingers know how to dance as well! ~J~

Paul Callus
Date: 3/15/2014 3:39:00 PM

Thank you once again Judith...you flatter me! // paul

Leon Enriquez

Date: 3/10/2014 10:49:00 PM

Dear Paul: A fabulous haiku. Thanks. Leon

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2014 8:24:00 AM

My thanks go to you Leon. cu around. // paul

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/7/2014 8:18:00 PM

Hi Paul; I agree with mary Jo. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Paul Callus
Date: 3/8/2014 4:03:00 AM

Thank you Lucilla; you're welcome to visit any time. // paul

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/7/2014 1:22:00 PM

So true! I really enjoyed reading this poem. It reminded me of summertime! Very nicely written, Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/7/2014 1:41:00 PM

Thanks Kelly. In our hot Maltese summers I often sit out at night watching sights like this in my garden. Then in the end I turn off the lights and watch the starry sky before finally going to bed :) // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2014 10:53:00 AM

Wow! Just love this one!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/6/2014 11:05:00 AM

I'm glad you do; your comment means a lot. // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/6/2014 4:02:00 AM

A sparkling gem of a haiku! brilliantly done!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/6/2014 10:42:00 AM

Thank you Demi for your sparkling comment! // paul

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/5/2014 6:22:00 PM

Nice visual. Well done!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/6/2014 10:42:00 AM

Txs Juliet; nice of you to visit. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2014 5:53:00 PM

this is a wonderful haiku!!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/6/2014 10:43:00 AM

Andrea, thank you for both visit and comment. // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/5/2014 4:13:00 PM

beguiling 'ku, paul.. light does sometimes draw us in.. greeat job and thnaks for passing by!.. huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 3/6/2014 10:48:00 AM

Love your comment. Always happy to visit and be visited. :) // paul

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/5/2014 11:22:00 AM

Like moths to a flame! Good one Paul! Jack

Paul Callus
Date: 3/5/2014 11:31:00 AM

Thank you Jack. We sometimes fall into temptation, even with fatal consequences...that flame...//paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2014 9:53:00 AM

Ahhh!! I like this one..That was one popular lantern..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am wondering if my fat doves are female and are the ones to lay the eggs soon..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 3/5/2014 10:44:00 AM

Kind of you to visit and comment. All the best to your doves...their plate needs replenishing :) // paul

Daver Austin

Date: 3/5/2014 8:07:00 AM

My favorite form, Paul, and wonderfully realized. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

Paul Callus
Date: 3/5/2014 10:41:00 AM

I'm glad you like it DA. Will try and visit your posts more often. // paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/5/2014 6:50:00 AM

A flattering haiku with beautiful imagery Paul!Excellent!!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/5/2014 10:37:00 AM

Thank you Charma...you do flatter me! :) paul