Flat Stanley Visits the Skagit Valley

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Flat stanley

Flat Stanley needed some time off
to have a little fun.
Cassidie thought her grandpa
would be the very one
to show him the sights and glories of
a great metropolis.
So she sent him off to Seattle
with a farewell wave and kiss.

Now I don't know all that Grandpa did
to show him a good time,
but Stanley came to see me too,
the reason for this rhyme.
April in our valley is
a true sight to behold,
with fields of flaming tulips 
and daffodils of gold.

When first he came I fed him.
He looked so strangely flat.
If Grandpa gave him food to eat
I don't know where it's at.
Then i told him that I'd take him for
a long floriferous stroll.
I knew those fields of flowers would
be food for Stanley's soul.

When Stanley saw those lovely flowers,
all he could do was smile.
I took him from my pocket
and let him run awhile.
He smelled of the pretty tulips
and laughed with pure elation.
He was so glad to see them
on his Washington vacation.

I live in Northern Washington
in the wonderful Puget sound,
in the lovely Skagit Valley,
the most beautiful place around.
I'm Cassidie's great grandaunt Joyce
and I'd like for her to know
that I want her to come with him
if flat Stanley wants to go
On another trip  to these parts
when he gets some itching feet.
Like he, she'd think this country is
extremely hard to beat.

The moral of this story is
if you're an imaginary kid
there's nothing that you cannot do 
and nothing is forbid.

(You can find stories about Flat Stanley by googling him. He is a literacy project for grade schools.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/20/2014 1:12:00 PM
Wow CONGRATS For 1st place! The rhymin flow and story of dis was sooo awesome, outstanding! Ah u created it all by yorself? Is the flat stanley a child u mean? Yor great gran child? Fond regards!
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Date: 11/19/2014 6:50:00 PM
Joyce, congratulations on your win for this great imaginative fable with a wonderful moral. Sandra
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Date: 11/19/2014 11:19:00 AM
This as good a write as I have ever read Joyce. You are as good a poet as any I have read. What an amazing talent you are. Congratulations on your win. You certainly won me with this marvelous story. I have added it to my Fav list.
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Date: 11/19/2014 6:47:00 AM
A lovely story Joyce...Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/19/2014 6:03:00 AM
Hi Joyce, It was a truly floriferous adventure. Who doesn't like a flower power walk? Great stuff. Great win. Keep up the good work. Have a great day. Earl
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Date: 11/18/2014 7:03:00 PM
I like Flat Stanley, congratulations Joyce.
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Date: 11/18/2014 5:26:00 PM
wonderful write Joyce so beautifully penned:-) many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 11/18/2014 4:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with Flat Stanley Joyce.
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Date: 4/11/2014 9:56:00 PM
I have not been to Washington, but it sounds like a beautiful place to visit. I enjoyed reading your poem tonight. Well done, Joyce! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
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Date: 4/10/2014 8:19:00 PM
smiling for you! congrats on a unique piece and win. BG
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Date: 4/10/2014 10:33:00 AM
Wonderful write Joyce! Congrats on fine win !
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Date: 4/10/2014 7:19:00 AM
Nice flow of words and expressions. Congrats on a fine win, joyce
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Date: 4/9/2014 8:45:00 PM
Hello Sweet Joyce, THANK YOU VERY MUCH, CONGRATULATIONS.... :) This was a very tough one to judge... GEEES, enjoy my latest blog if you like.... always & forever... Linda
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Date: 4/5/2014 4:10:00 PM
- A pleasure to read - a lovely poem,Joyce! - Wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/5/2014 2:57:00 PM
Dear Joyce, Sandra and I read this tender poem together. How wonderful that "Flat Stanley" had a chance to visit you and see the lush valley in which you live. Wish we could see it too, but feel we have through your vivid and creative description. I have a feeling Stanley will return and I do hope Cassidie come with him. We laughed at your description of how his grandfather "fed" him. LOL Kids are often thin. Love and blessings, Carolyn and Sandra
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 4/5/2014 3:24:00 PM
You can google Flat Stanley and view him. You must have wondered why I had him in my pocket. Some of the school teachers have kids send him out on adventures and then they talk about them in class. This was a class project and the poem was one I sent back with him. Love, Joyce
Date: 4/4/2014 7:54:00 PM
I loved when we sent Flat Stanley off to visit his aunt in Clearwater Beach...He is one lucky fellow...Great write Joyce
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Date: 4/4/2014 7:38:00 PM
'I took him from my pocket'? I'm intrigued. Enjoyed this ryhme, very entertaining.
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 4/5/2014 3:28:00 PM
He's a literary kid and goes on these adventures. My great niece sent him to me as a class project and my poem was one of the items he picked up in his travels. You can google about him.. Thanks for reading and commenting. Love Joyce
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