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Flamingo Dance

Flamingo Dance Such a prissy flashy crowd Pink burlesque feathers sashay left. One leg up the other down Drop the neck and touch the ground Graceful poses in bright hue Ibis dances two by two Shuffle faster, ruffle feathers Real life pink Flamingo dancers.

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Date: 2/8/2010 12:01:00 AM
Lots of rythm here Jeralyn.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 2/6/2010 6:13:00 AM
Exquisite write with great rhythm and rhyme. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem. Sara
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Date: 2/4/2010 6:27:00 PM
this is a really vivid cute poem. Like it alot, Jeralynn. -Robert
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Date: 2/4/2010 3:28:00 AM
Loved this, great image you have created Daniel
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Date: 2/1/2010 8:45:00 AM
Breathtaking images of flamingo dancers you paint for us. It is a proud, sensual dance, full of color and dignity. You have penned it well. I want to thank you for your comment on my poem, Pegassus, The Winged Steed, a mythological story. This is a new interest for me, and a source of endless inspiration.
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Date: 1/31/2010 3:31:00 PM
Such beautiful birds!
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Date: 1/31/2010 1:43:00 PM
sounds beautiful, very descriptive
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Date: 1/31/2010 1:12:00 PM
Great description of the birds. They're so much fun to watch -- vibrant color! And their ability to stand for long periods on one leg is amazing. Thanks for sharing, Carolyn
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