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Flames of Love

your love is the fire I yearn to touch, deep in my heart ignites flame's of lust your love is a lantern shining through night, it signals a desire that thrashes to bite your love lights stars that tear holes in time, your love is a riddle at the end of my rhyme your love caresses the deepest I hurt, your eyes see through to where I was burnt your love healed scars time wore into my skin, with the tiniest kisses you absolved all my sins your love brought life to a Mistress of pain, I’m not lost anymore I breathe freely again

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Date: 5/20/2014 9:46:00 AM
Love how this poem flows with the rhyme; beautiful all along. // paul
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 5/20/2014 10:07:00 AM
I used to write wholly in rhyme but I moved to free verse and I think that's were my heart lies, I still write in rhyme but not so much these days, I do it mainly to keep the skills fluid lol ....love Jayne xxx
Date: 7/24/2011 7:08:00 PM
A delightful verse - so tender and dear.
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Date: 10/11/2010 5:31:00 AM
WOW i love this image Jayne, i feel this peace in my heart so much ,the thought are wonderful in mind thank you [Duncan]
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Date: 10/4/2010 9:32:00 PM
Many nice lines in this one, jayne. Was it for the contest on embers? thanks for your comments today. I shall have many of your poems to catch up on. I just saw at least seven pages you have. lUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:39:00 AM
Beautiful work..If for any of the contest, good luck..Very passionate..Sara
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Date: 10/3/2010 5:40:00 AM
Beautiful poem of love and devotion Jayne >> James
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Date: 10/2/2010 12:42:00 PM
so lovely well done enjoyed and thanks for your kind comments have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 10/1/2010 9:59:00 PM
Oh what abeautiful rhyme Jayne. I loved the similies you have used. Thanks for the comments.
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Date: 10/1/2010 4:29:00 PM
Hi! Jayne, ooo! wow! what a beauty,/flames of lust/, a true an excellent way to enjoy and read your poem. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 10/1/2010 12:17:00 PM
I am stopping back to thank you for your always kind comments on my poetry Jayne. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:09:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Jayne. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 10:44:00 AM
Nicely done, Jayne and good. vErses 2 and 5 are exceptional. Fix " Through" in verse 4. A Mistress of pain rolls nice off the tongue. Thank you and warm regards, Gerard.
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Date: 10/1/2010 9:16:00 AM
Beautiful write, a testimony of love ;) Wilma
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