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Flamenco In Sevilla

Sevilla, the evening pins flowers on your hair
A pirouette of tasselled gown rustles by
Igniting a lusty swirl along theater’s wing,
Over spotlights on red liquefied hips
That kiss of flamenco gyres into a dance ;
Relishing the wine which drips as you lift
And tap those feet through moonshine’s gloam:
O, such swaggers devour my senses
While Latin music sets the castanets ablaze--
Then a pause, a sensuous movement, jigging.

Sevilla, you are a luscious pageant of a song,
A brief canticle gliding on my bones, that I
Fondle you in the dark    caressing scented nape:
What endless thrill you bring on an August dusk!
Then together drunken madly ,   recklessly 
I will be  love's sunrise, and you my finale's art,
As  this heart etches a twirl in flamenco sighs,
Clinging to each refrain of such possessed trance.



For Silent One's Contest:
Poems That Paint a Picture-3    9/24/2017
~ a most memorable dinner in Sevilla
watching a Flamenco concert~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:41 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your with a beautiful poem.
Ashley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Back again Nette to congratulate you on your win with this sensual and lovely poem.
La France Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Nette, this is lovely congratulations!
Lindley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 9:33 AM
Congrats my friend on your fine win. You painted a most wondrous picture of the dancer and her deep effect upon those watching her twirling artistry! Very deep understanding of the dance and of poetry and is brilliant depths as well.
One Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 7:32 AM
Lovely imagery as always Nette..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Williams Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 7:19 AM
There are some who think in poetry, true poets they are, and you are up there with the best Nette. I love the scene you paint with your words. Brilliant as always...Maria xx
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 7:09 AM
Congrats nette!
Warrior Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 11:25 AM
Beautifully portrayed my friend...as always your words smooth as silk...best of luck...god bless...^WW^
Daniel Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 2:01 AM
Wow! Such lovely words drip from your pen mesmerising me, Nette:)
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 1:51 AM
- To me it sounds like a beautiful dream - Excellent for the contest image, Nette :) -   Good luck - Best wishes for a lovely new week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 11:18 PM
Stunningly sensual images ... wonderful ... good luck with the contest...
Ashley Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 6:37 PM
Your poem oozes sensuality Nette. Ablaze with lustrous imagery. Very seductive indeed. Good luck in the contest!
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 4:24 PM
Stunning imagery and sensuality Nette, who needs a picture, you painted the scene so well with your words, should do very well in the contest!
Callus Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 2:39 PM
Delightful music and beauty flow from this Flamenco offering, Nette. Body movements and footwork are very much in evidence. The second stanza enthralls with sensuality. If the sponsor asked for a painted picture he needs look no further! Hugs // paul
Sabre Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 1:53 PM
The power of this work lies in its subliminal seduction-- a swagger here and drunkenness there. Exceptional!
Michael Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 10:54 AM
This was good. I enjoyed it...It's also my dream to go to Andalucia...to learn Flamenco guitar...Have a lovely day
Sands Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:13 AM
This is beautifully written Nette. Good luck in the contest ! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 7:26 AM
Beautiful rhythm and dance--lovey lyrics--so well written and executed--romantic and poetic, nette!
Sivey Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 7:15 AM
Wow, Wow, Wow! Nette, you have surely written such a stupendous write here! I'm in awe of this stunning and spectacularly superior poem! I truly loved reading this awesome piece this morning! What a delicate and softly sensual piece, filled with fire of the essence of a magnificent dance! Great Work!!
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