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Flagrant Fluid

feathers twirled, long into the night. ebonic ink, splotched and saturated, with the heart’s content. t e a r s created the first draft of watercolors, s e a r i n g of the candlelight vigil, long forgotten grief, h o w e v e r God never f o r g e t s He bottles up the flagrant fluid of our awfulness, kept for the day of wrath. Careless, never; He eyes antiquity.

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Date: 6/14/2025 7:55:00 PM
This is a tearjerker. Your words are stunning- a sweet testimony..."He eyes antiquity"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2025 8:14:00 PM
Thanj you, Paige! I appreciate you.
Date: 6/14/2025 6:30:00 PM
So beautifully written and wise, Kim. I enjoyed reading this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2025 6:53:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 6/14/2025 3:19:00 PM
Your poem was delightfully engaging. I loved reading it and absorbing its wisdom Well done! yellow rose
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2025 5:00:00 PM
Thank you most kindly! Hugs
Date: 6/14/2025 9:13:00 AM
This was fun to follow the words where they led. To wisdom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2025 5:00:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 6/14/2025 7:53:00 AM
For sure, God never forsakes us, always with us, and, often where I have forgiven, He seems to have held a grudge...I expect I will question Him about that, some day, and make sure to be satisfied with the final answer. Always wonderfully creative! Enjoyed very much.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2025 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 6/14/2025 7:26:00 AM
Very interesting write! I did not get the whole meaning, yet, I liked it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2025 7:32:00 AM
I’m glad you liked it! In the bible, God’s wrath is contained in those woeful prayers from all ages. He will throw them to the earth, in the end. God bless you, sweet friend!

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