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The Story Teller She's happy in the winter of her years, near ninety-five, but still so keen of mind. Imagination is her gift that cheers the visitors that come and are inclined to stay a while and listen to her spin her stories. As an author, she once wrote of kings and queens, the rulers they had been, alive still in her memory to quote. Forgotten soul she is; no next of kin now left to visit her for quite a while. But in that nursing home, she draws them in with those great tales, she offers with a smile. If only winter years for all could be so happy with the gift of memory. Sandra M. Haight ~12th Place~ Contest: The Five Word Challenge Sponsor: Timothy Hicks Judged: 06/09/2016 Below are my five Best Poems listed on PS, and the longest words are capitalized. The capitalized words were used in my poem. We RULERS of the Earth The GIFT of Time IMAGINATION WINTER FORGOTTEN Soul

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2016 7:01:00 PM

wow, so sweet this is. Congrats on the winner list, Sandra

Janis Thompson

Date: 6/9/2016 12:34:00 PM

Beautiful write.....congratulations, Sandra

Sandra Haight
Date: 6/10/2016 3:26:00 PM

Thank you so much, Janis. Hugs, Sandra

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/9/2016 12:44:00 AM

What amazed me about this poem was how I didn't even realize I was reading a sonnet until the second read. You seem to write in such a way that's both conversation as well as poetic ... where rhymes are just a bonus, but not the main focus. I enjoyed the tale about this whimsical old woman who still has the spark of youth in her. Check out my blog, if you ever get the chance, and tell me about your poem :)

Sandra Haight
Date: 6/10/2016 3:24:00 PM

Hi Tim, thank you so much! I enjoyed the contest and loved weaving in my five words. I appreciate your nice feedback, and thank you for my placement on your list. Looking forward to your next one! Sandra

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/1/2016 4:07:00 PM

Excellent poem on the five words challenge my lovely friend. Good luck with a +7. Loved always, bl

Funom Makama

Date: 5/30/2016 11:25:00 AM

Great write, beautiful lines. A well deserved 7

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/28/2016 9:13:00 AM

Very creative to mingle this titles together and come up with such a very compelling to read work..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/28/2016 10:23:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. I am pleased that you enjoyed it. Hugs, Sandra

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/27/2016 10:50:00 PM

Great--a 7-plus, Sandra! Janice

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/28/2016 10:23:00 PM

Thank you so much, Janice for the nice comment and 7! Hugs, Sandra

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 5/27/2016 2:15:00 PM

Lovely old woman you painted here Sandra,esp the last two lines are just superb!

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/27/2016 3:27:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Sara. I appreciate your nice visits and comments. Hugs, Sandra

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/26/2016 11:34:00 PM

You spun an excellent story of age and wisdom with your five words, Sandra! Just brilliant and I think this poem will rank high in the contest, too! A 7 :)

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/27/2016 9:08:00 AM

Thank you so much for stopping by, Laura, with your very supportive comment and nice rating! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/26/2016 9:30:00 PM

A beautiful sonnet Sandra. I loved your ending as it makes one aware of the blessings of having a sharp mind, no matter ones age. My Aunt died at almost 90 and she was busy teaching all the interested ladies at her rest home how to do fine embroidery. Sadly she died because pills they gave her made her dizzy and she fell and hit her head. She was so full of life and enjoyed living like the person in your poem. #7. ; )

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/27/2016 9:14:00 AM

Connie, thank you so much for your nice comment on my poem. Wow... What an amazing aunt, she was, and how unfortunate the circumstance of her passing. Thanks again, and for the nice 7 too! Hugs, Sandra

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/26/2016 11:36:00 PM

I noticed your comment, Connie, and your aunt sounded like a remarkable woman! Good memory with age is such a blessing!