Five Rain Lilies

five rain lilies bloom stalwart facing the morn's sun... solid clouds at bay

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2013 11:15:00 PM

i love the solid bay look... very tender... Linda

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/24/2013 8:38:00 PM

This is a powerfully worded image you have written here my friend! I really enjoy your very wonderful Haiku that you wrote Sara! I simply loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/24/2013 3:05:00 PM

Oh, I like this Sara, it's raining here today,,, sun was out yesterday ;}

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/24/2013 2:11:00 PM

Very imaginative Haiku, Sara! (& thanks for your kind comments)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/24/2013 10:31:00 AM

rain and sun blending in to clinch at end line with an aha moment... lovely, sara..:)

John Posey

Date: 6/24/2013 8:29:00 AM

I'm beginning to believe that you are to haikus what Shakespeare is to Sonnets. Well done.... love ya... Jake.