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Five Passing Cloud Hai-Ku

Clouds pass by, silent, against cerulean sky... daring you to watch! Artists paint the sky, they say the clouds are easy... they come in all shapes! There was a rogue cloud, it came from the horizon... to share drops of hope! Clouds float overhead, they're waving their big white hands... and the odd smile! There comes a hard rain, to take my sister sorrow... and my brother pain! date: 3/2/23

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Date: 3/19/2023 8:22:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start till the end. God bless you.
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Meru Groen
Date: 3/20/2023 2:18:00 PM
Thanks, Beata, your comments always make me feel good, Meru.
Date: 3/18/2023 7:44:00 PM
Great imagery in your verse. Sorry about your brother's pain when the weather changes. Congratulations on your win in JCB Brul's contest.
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Meru Groen
Date: 3/20/2023 2:18:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, Eve, I really appreciate it!
Date: 3/3/2023 12:07:00 AM
lovely haikus, we have to care about clouds and theirs messages, great work yann
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Meru Groen
Date: 3/20/2023 2:20:00 PM
Thanks, I really appreciate the comment...Meru.

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