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Oh let me relish five more days of spring, Where tulips and dogwoods pose to beguile May’s grandeur tossing its hues...so I fling-- ‘Oh let me relish five more days of spring.’ Although near June casts its heated upswing Vibrant weaves of blooms adorn field's aisle ... ...: ‘Oh, let me relish five more days of spring’ Where tulips and dogwoods pose to beguile! Written 5/6/2019 Not entered in the Contest

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Date: 5/21/2019 10:41:00 PM
Nicely done nette. Love the last line
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Date: 5/16/2019 7:50:00 PM
Also your poem in my contest would have made the perfect number of FIVE that had gone with the theme of FIVE!
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Date: 5/10/2019 4:31:00 PM
Beautiful....the imagery is captivating; you take May to a dreamy level, Nette. Like me, you went for ten syllables each line. Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/9/2019 7:14:00 PM
Beautiful imagery for befitting words, excellently done, Aloha @wk
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Date: 5/8/2019 8:50:00 PM
The rules of this form boggled my mind Nette. This is a lovely entry for the contest my friend. Best for a high placement! : ) xxoo
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Date: 5/8/2019 9:38:00 AM
Wow I really love this triolet - don't think I could succeed at this form of poetry but you totally exceed Nette, Hugs, Jen.
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Date: 5/7/2019 9:58:00 PM
You have created a May to Remember, nette, a May for the Ages. Please airmail it my way, here in cold, nasty Chicago. Beatifully done. ~ gw
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Date: 5/7/2019 9:39:00 PM
Adding to the chorus of others, splendidly done! Aloha William...
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Date: 5/7/2019 9:26:00 AM
Beautifully written. Excellent meter. The pic matches the subject perfectly. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/7/2019 7:47:00 AM
Excellent rhythm and flow..so well written, Nette.
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Date: 5/7/2019 5:58:00 AM
A lovely Triolet, love this: "Luscious weave of greenfields adorn each aisle ..."l enjoyed the read.
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Date: 5/7/2019 5:19:00 AM
I like this...lovely write....
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Date: 5/6/2019 10:43:00 PM
Such luscious imagery of spring to savor, Nette. Lovely and lyrical. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/6/2019 4:33:00 PM
A beautifully penned triolet, and I am so glad you put (tree-o-lay) in your notes, for that is an idea I had no concept about.
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Date: 5/6/2019 3:49:00 PM
Lovely nette, the freshness of spring and late spring flowers soon disappear making way for the intense heat of June. Tom
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Date: 5/6/2019 3:33:00 PM
Nicely written, Nette, late spring is one of my happiest times of the year; I could feel this season in your poem. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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