Nette Onclaud Poet Triolet

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Five More Days

Oh let  me relish five more days of spring,
Where tulips and dogwoods pose  to beguile
May’s grandeur  tossing  its hues...so I fling--
‘Oh  let  me relish five more days  of spring.’

Although near June casts its heated upswing
Vibrant weaves of blooms adorn field's aisle ... ...:
‘Oh,  let  me relish five more days  of spring’
Where  tulips and dogwoods pose  to beguile!




Written 5/6/2019
Not entered in the Contest

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr. May 21, 2019 at 10:41 PM Nicely done nette. Love the last line

Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2019 at 7:50 PM Also your poem in my contest would have made the perfect number of FIVE that had gone with the theme of FIVE!

Paul Callus May 10, 2019 at 4:31 PM Beautiful....the imagery is captivating; you take May to a dreamy level, Nette. Like me, you went for ten syllables each line. Hugs // paul

William Kelii Kekaula May 9, 2019 at 7:14 PM Beautiful imagery for befitting words, excellently done, Aloha @wk

Connie Marcum Wong May 8, 2019 at 8:50 PM The rules of this form boggled my mind Nette. This is a lovely entry for the contest my friend. Best for a high placement! : ) xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos May 8, 2019 at 9:38 AM Wow I really love this triolet - don't think I could succeed at this form of poetry but you totally exceed Nette, Hugs, Jen.

Gershon Wolf May 7, 2019 at 9:58 PM You have created a May to Remember, nette, a May for the Ages. Please airmail it my way, here in cold, nasty Chicago. Beatifully done. ~ gw

William Kelii Kekaula May 7, 2019 at 9:39 PM Adding to the chorus of others, splendidly done! Aloha William...

Judy Ball May 7, 2019 at 9:26 AM Beautifully written. Excellent meter. The pic matches the subject perfectly. Love it. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit May 7, 2019 at 7:47 AM Excellent rhythm and flow..so well written, Nette.

M. L. Kiser May 7, 2019 at 5:58 AM A lovely Triolet, love this: "Luscious weave of greenfields adorn each aisle ..."l enjoyed the read.

Arturo Michael May 7, 2019 at 5:19 AM I like this...lovely write....

Susan Ashley May 6, 2019 at 10:43 PM Such luscious imagery of spring to savor, Nette. Lovely and lyrical. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Caren Krutsinger May 6, 2019 at 4:33 PM A beautifully penned triolet, and I am so glad you put (tree-o-lay) in your notes, for that is an idea I had no concept about.

Tom Cunningham May 6, 2019 at 3:49 PM Lovely nette, the freshness of spring and late spring flowers soon disappear making way for the intense heat of June. Tom

John Gondolf May 6, 2019 at 3:33 PM Nicely written, Nette, late spring is one of my happiest times of the year; I could feel this season in your poem. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John