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Meets Nanny Named Annie Given treat – Candy sweet Mummy cross … Candy dross! Happy child Mummy riled! Lolly falls Tommy bawls! Tacky pants Mummy rants Tommy cries Daddy sighs Fresh lolly Tommy jolly Happy smile Short while Chews lolly Great folly Awful truth hurts tooth Blood pours Tommy roars Tears spill Mouth swill Tommy yelps Annie helps Hides candy Nanny handy! Annie sorry Gives lorry Tommy plays Happy phase! "Fem Bogstaver" Contest Sponsored by Rhoda Tripp 18/12/17

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/5/2018 8:39:00 PM

A lovely rhyme, Jan. Well done. Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2018 6:54:00 AM

Thanks Line:-) hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/20/2018 3:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jan - this was a very tough exercise, and I am honored to be on a list with such wonderful writers! Blessings, Friend! :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2018 12:32:00 PM

Likewise Greg:-) hugs jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 1/15/2018 5:25:00 AM

Congratulations, Jan on your placement.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2018 5:28:00 AM

Thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx

Curtis Moorman

Date: 1/14/2018 10:52:00 PM

Congrats, Jan! Not many people know that many 5 letter words. lol

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2018 5:02:00 AM

ha ha ha Curtis ... of course I would have struggled using 4 letter words lol lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 1/14/2018 6:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan, nicely done on a 5 letter word challenge. I missed this one ! . Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2018 6:43:00 PM

Thanks Eve there are many poems i missed when i was sick:-( hugs jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 1/14/2018 4:48:00 PM

This is very cute indeed. Congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2018 4:57:00 PM

Thanks Dale:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/21/2017 9:03:00 AM

Gosh, you sure handled this challenge with confidence, Jan! I'm still fiddling around with it, and keep getting stuck, but even so, will not fall back on 4 letter words:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2017 9:24:00 AM

Initially I thought it would be simple to do but I really did find a challenge Paul:-) hugs jan xx

Fj Thomas

Date: 12/20/2017 1:11:00 PM

Lol bout sums it up! Excellent 5 letter feat Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2017 9:23:00 AM

Thanks Shadow:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/20/2017 7:29:00 AM

Your talent is brilliant, Jan, this sounds like an extension of your footle stories :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2017 9:22:00 AM

I did it in footle style Jo my muse is not behaving much at the moment and writing is taking a back seat:-) hugs Jan xx

Niketa Mckenzie

Date: 12/19/2017 3:26:00 PM

loved it Jan! i had so much fun reading this so well written

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2017 4:29:00 PM

Thanks Niketa:-) hugs jan xx

David Mohn

Date: 12/19/2017 2:34:00 PM

quite a rhyming string of lines Jan...nicely written :) good luck to you

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2017 4:28:00 PM

Thanks David:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/19/2017 12:48:00 PM

- .... nothing can stop you :))) ... very well done, Jan :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2017 4:27:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise I may be a bit quiet son has arrived and I want to spend lots of time with him:-)hugs jan xx

Anna Hopper

Date: 12/19/2017 12:27:00 PM

Awesome! Another fun read, this afternoon!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2017 4:26:00 PM

Thanks again Anna-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/19/2017 9:42:00 AM

VERY creative, Jan! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2017 4:26:00 PM

Thanks Janice:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 12/19/2017 8:57:00 AM

Very nicely done Jan...Gl in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2017 8:58:00 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2017 5:19:00 PM

oh how GREAT that you used like a kind of footle pattern!! I can't wait to get started on this one. Cleverly done, Jan. I hope you are feeling ok today!!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2017 5:29:00 PM

I did it like a sort of footle its quite a challenge with the restriction in letters I just had fun:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/18/2017 4:17:00 PM

Oh you wrote this so well Jan. It was such fun to read and loved the cute photo too! I bet this will do really well in the contest. I haven't been online much at all because of dental pain. I am behind but will try to catch up. I'm seeing the dentist today and hope to get things cleared up. Have a lovely holiday Jan. Is it snowing? ; )

Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2017 4:47:00 PM

Thanks so much Connie I had fun with the challenge:-) I hope you can get the pain sorted soon. No snow here but there are some residual patches on the hills :-) hugs jan xx

Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/18/2017 1:43:00 PM

Hallo Loves...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/19/2017 1:33:00 PM

I mean it .....Haloo loves (five letters)...........you... Merry Christmas.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2017 3:40:00 PM

Thanks so much Pashang:-) hugs jan xx

Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/18/2017 1:43:00 PM

Haloo Loves....

Lin Lane

Date: 12/18/2017 12:27:00 PM

Tommy Toddler has a temper. Good work on the five letter count, Jan. It's Bogstaver good!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2017 3:40:00 PM

I love the pic I found to go with the poem lol:-)Having chatted with other parents I know how grandparents can and do spoil the children and the conflict it can cause especially with sweets:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/18/2017 12:07:00 PM

This is so cute and clever Jan, I really liked it, good Luck !!!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2017 3:38:00 PM

Thanks Mike:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/18/2017 11:32:00 AM

what a clever fun piece. Good luck in the contest Jan. Merry Christmas to you and those who are important to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2017 3:38:00 PM

Thanks Richard and my very best wishes to you and your loved ones. Tomorrow i get the best gift of all, my son is home for 2 weeks:-) i ask for nothing more:-) hugs jan xx

John Gondolf

Date: 12/18/2017 9:35:00 AM

Jan, looks like you were up for the challenge as well. Good luck in the contest. John

Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2017 10:00:00 AM

I thought I would give it a try John it's not as easy as i imagined!:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/18/2017 8:38:00 AM

Hi Jan, I knew you would rise to the challenge. I enjoyed the story you told. Nice humorous touch. Great rhymes as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2017 8:58:00 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) I had fun with the challenge it was far more difficult than I imagined!:-) hugs jan xx