Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Five Letter Words

Meets Nanny

Named Annie

Given treat –

Candy sweet

Mummy cross …

Candy dross!

Happy child

Mummy riled!

Lolly falls

Tommy bawls!

Tacky pants

Mummy rants

Tommy cries

Daddy sighs

Fresh lolly

Tommy jolly

Happy smile

Short while

Chews lolly

Great folly

Awful truth

hurts tooth

Blood pours

Tommy roars

Tears spill

Mouth swill

Tommy yelps

Annie helps

Hides candy

Nanny handy!

Annie sorry

Gives lorry

Tommy plays

Happy phase!


"Fem Bogstaver"  Contest 
Sponsored by Rhoda Tripp 

18/12/17

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Line Gauthier May 5, 2018 at 8:39 PM A lovely rhyme, Jan. Well done. Congrats on your win. Jan Allison May 6, 2018 at 6:54 AM Thanks Line:-) hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden January 20, 2018 at 3:14 AM Congratulations on your win, Jan - this was a very tough exercise, and I am honored to be on a list with such wonderful writers! Blessings, Friend! :-) Jan Allison January 20, 2018 at 12:32 PM Likewise Greg:-) hugs jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy January 15, 2018 at 5:25 AM Congratulations, Jan on your placement. Jan Allison January 15, 2018 at 5:28 AM Thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx

Curtis Moorman January 14, 2018 at 10:52 PM Congrats, Jan! Not many people know that many 5 letter words. lol Jan Allison January 15, 2018 at 5:02 AM ha ha ha Curtis ... of course I would have struggled using 4 letter words lol lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper January 14, 2018 at 6:39 PM Congratulations on your win, Jan, nicely done on a 5 letter word challenge. I missed this one ! . Hugs Eve ~`* Jan Allison January 14, 2018 at 6:43 PM Thanks Eve there are many poems i missed when i was sick:-( hugs jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart January 14, 2018 at 4:48 PM This is very cute indeed. Congrats. Jan Allison January 14, 2018 at 4:57 PM Thanks Dale:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus December 21, 2017 at 9:03 AM Gosh, you sure handled this challenge with confidence, Jan! I'm still fiddling around with it, and keep getting stuck, but even so, will not fall back on 4 letter words:) Hugs // paul Jan Allison December 21, 2017 at 9:24 AM Initially I thought it would be simple to do but I really did find a challenge Paul:-) hugs jan xx

FJ Thomas December 20, 2017 at 1:11 PM Lol bout sums it up! Excellent 5 letter feat Jan! Jan Allison December 21, 2017 at 9:23 AM Thanks Shadow:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel December 20, 2017 at 7:29 AM Your talent is brilliant, Jan, this sounds like an extension of your footle stories :) Jan Allison December 21, 2017 at 9:22 AM I did it in footle style Jo my muse is not behaving much at the moment and writing is taking a back seat:-) hugs Jan xx

Niketa Mckenzie December 19, 2017 at 3:26 PM loved it Jan! i had so much fun reading this so well written Jan Allison December 19, 2017 at 4:29 PM Thanks Niketa:-) hugs jan xx

David Mohn December 19, 2017 at 2:34 PM quite a rhyming string of lines Jan...nicely written :) good luck to you Jan Allison December 19, 2017 at 4:28 PM Thanks David:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2017 at 12:48 PM - .... nothing can stop you :))) ... very well done, Jan :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison December 19, 2017 at 4:27 PM Thanks Anne Lise I may be a bit quiet son has arrived and I want to spend lots of time with him:-)hugs jan xx

Anna Hopper December 19, 2017 at 12:27 PM Awesome! Another fun read, this afternoon! Jan Allison December 19, 2017 at 4:26 PM Thanks again Anna-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy December 19, 2017 at 9:42 AM VERY creative, Jan! Janice Jan Allison December 19, 2017 at 4:26 PM Thanks Janice:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May December 19, 2017 at 8:57 AM Very nicely done Jan...Gl in the contest Jan Allison December 19, 2017 at 8:58 AM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2017 at 5:19 PM oh how GREAT that you used like a kind of footle pattern!! I can't wait to get started on this one. Cleverly done, Jan. I hope you are feeling ok today!! Jan Allison December 18, 2017 at 5:29 PM I did it like a sort of footle its quite a challenge with the restriction in letters I just had fun:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong December 18, 2017 at 4:17 PM Oh you wrote this so well Jan. It was such fun to read and loved the cute photo too! I bet this will do really well in the contest. I haven't been online much at all because of dental pain. I am behind but will try to catch up. I'm seeing the dentist today and hope to get things cleared up. Have a lovely holiday Jan. Is it snowing? ; ) Jan Allison December 18, 2017 at 4:47 PM Thanks so much Connie I had fun with the challenge:-) I hope you can get the pain sorted soon. No snow here but there are some residual patches on the hills :-) hugs jan xx

Pashang Salehi December 18, 2017 at 1:43 PM Hallo Loves... Pashang Salehi December 19, 2017 at 1:33 PM I mean it .....Haloo loves (five letters)...........you... Merry Christmas. Jan Allison December 18, 2017 at 3:40 PM Thanks so much Pashang:-) hugs jan xx Pashang Salehi December 18, 2017 at 1:43 PM Haloo Loves....

Lin Lane December 18, 2017 at 12:27 PM Tommy Toddler has a temper. Good work on the five letter count, Jan. It's Bogstaver good! Jan Allison December 18, 2017 at 3:40 PM I love the pic I found to go with the poem lol:-)Having chatted with other parents I know how grandparents can and do spoil the children and the conflict it can cause especially with sweets:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile December 18, 2017 at 12:07 PM This is so cute and clever Jan, I really liked it, good Luck !!! Jan Allison December 18, 2017 at 3:38 PM Thanks Mike:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux December 18, 2017 at 11:32 AM what a clever fun piece. Good luck in the contest Jan. Merry Christmas to you and those who are important to you. Jan Allison December 18, 2017 at 3:38 PM Thanks Richard and my very best wishes to you and your loved ones. Tomorrow i get the best gift of all, my son is home for 2 weeks:-) i ask for nothing more:-) hugs jan xx

John Gondolf December 18, 2017 at 9:35 AM Jan, looks like you were up for the challenge as well. Good luck in the contest. John Jan Allison December 18, 2017 at 10:00 AM I thought I would give it a try John it's not as easy as i imagined!:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. December 18, 2017 at 8:38 AM Hi Jan, I knew you would rise to the challenge. I enjoyed the story you told. Nice humorous touch. Great rhymes as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Jan Allison December 18, 2017 at 8:58 AM Thanks Alexis:-) I had fun with the challenge it was far more difficult than I imagined!:-) hugs jan xx