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Five Letter Words

Under azure blank ocean waves break Foamy water curls above beach slope Sands dance, their tight grips shake Ocean depth their slide would probe. Burnt cloud gives fiery color touch Ocean water glows until night falls Misty dusts weave dream, stars watch Bated heart waits until Cupid calls. Winds write fluid songs ocean sings Magic tunes flood lover minds blind Their lives merge where music rings Bliss under cover their heart finds. December 17, 2017. Contest : Fem Bogstaver. Sponsor : Rhoda Tripp.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/5/2018 8:33:00 PM

Superb, Subimal. Belated congrats on your top win.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/7/2018 2:45:00 AM

Thank you Line for your visit and liking the poem.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/20/2018 3:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Subimal - this was a very tough exercise, and I am honored to be on a list with such wonderful writers! Blessings, Friend! :-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/20/2018 10:53:00 AM

Thank you, Greg. Yes, it was. I congratulate you on your win as well. I value your comments so much.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/14/2018 6:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win , Subimal, nicely done with the 5 letter challenge . Hugs Eve ~`*

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/18/2018 12:41:00 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/14/2018 4:02:00 PM

Subimal, congratulations on your podium win for this amazing poem! You have met the five-letter-word challenge wonderfully! Hugs, Sandra

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/14/2018 3:23:00 PM

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 12/17/2017 8:14:00 PM

An awesome five letter love poem Subimal~Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/17/2017 10:24:00 PM

Thank you, Cheryl for your visit.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/17/2017 3:57:00 PM

Brilliant!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/17/2017 10:24:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/17/2017 1:48:00 PM

Nicely done and the imagery is wonderful , Subimal, good luck in the contest Eve ~`*

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/17/2017 10:23:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/17/2017 1:25:00 PM

You have done very well with this challenge, Subimal! Apart from the striking content, you also managed to add smooth flowing rhyme. Regards // paul

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/17/2017 10:23:00 PM

Thank you, Paul for your visit and appreciation.