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A Cute Ankle

Alone, aging actor alive after abuse.
Adult adept, adapt action above acute ankle.
Admit ached, agree affix aptly crepe.
Ashen apres, amigo angry apart afore. 
Asked aloof aunty avoid awful baloo.
Alarm nurse ahead, agony alert.
Aggro afoot...adios amigo.

Copyright © Jean Murray | Year Posted 2017

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George Stanworth Date: 6/28/2018 11:21:00 AM A very clever and inventive poem Jean. I enjoyed reading it. Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 6/28/2018 4:28:00 PM Thank you George. I'm laughing now on rereading it. I certainly was having fun that evening.

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 3/19/2018 3:34:00 AM This was fun to read. And the ballo sticking out. Amazing... Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 3/19/2018 4:01:00 AM Top of the morning to you in Africa Kai. I wasn't even on drugs when I wrote that poem...imagine.

Bartholomew Williams Date: 3/18/2018 11:37:00 AM Jean, you showed some truly admirable creativity and thought with this one, which I greatly enjoyed. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. Congratulations on your win!! Blessings to you, my friend. :) Bartholomew Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 3/18/2018 12:06:00 PM I had fun doing it Bartholomew and thank you for taking the time to comment.

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/18/2018 3:00:00 AM Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, Jean - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-) Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 3/18/2018 4:38:00 AM I feel blessed among this lovely like minded community Greg. Thank you.

Eve Roper Date: 3/17/2018 6:14:00 PM Jean, well done and enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`* Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 3/17/2018 7:29:00 PM enjoy the evening sweet lady Jean Murray Date: 3/17/2018 6:55:00 PM At five minutes to midnight, here's a St. Paddy's Day hug right back at you Eve. Thank you for your visit.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2018 2:21:00 PM - Congratulations on your winning poem, very clever and unique Jean :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 3/17/2018 2:26:00 PM Good evening Anne-Lise. It is our national holiday today where everyone gets drunk! Sadly, I'm only on my first glass on wine. I love your visits because you bring such warmth with you. Thank you.

Line Gauthier Date: 3/17/2018 10:25:00 AM I love your first line, Jean. I fell in love with this actor right away. Very unfortunate that he died tragically of a foot infection. LOL Well done. Congrats. Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 3/17/2018 12:19:00 PM I'm just delighted you could follow my train of thought Line. In fact he survived, thanks to the nifty nurse.

Viv Wigley Date: 1/1/2018 10:43:00 AM Very clever Jean, and says a lot. Wishing you a happier new year, love ' n hugs, Viv x Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 1/1/2018 10:45:00 AM You too Viv and thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/30/2017 2:33:00 PM - Dear Jean :) - My best wishes for a peaceful and happy new year, and I thank you for your friendship through the year 2017 - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 12/30/2017 4:49:00 PM My dearest Anna-Lise, you are too kind. I feel bad that I have not been here as much as I should. The Soup has been a wonderful place of refuge for me, thanks to you and others like you. I have renewed my membership recently for another two years, so I do intend to post plenty of poems. Not all as crazy as above I hope.

Jan Allison Date: 12/22/2017 4:27:00 PM oh clever you to use such awesome alliteration! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 12/22/2017 6:02:00 PM Hi Jan. Thank you for your good luck wishes and merry Xmas

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/20/2017 1:57:00 PM Jean, I see you stuck with lots of A words. Which made your poem quite unique. I loved how you ended Adios Amigo!! You even got in some Spanish words! This was a very difficult challenge, Will post mine later today. Hope you are having a merry XMas season! Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 12/20/2017 2:13:00 PM I know your one will be worth reading Andrea. Best of luck.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/20/2017 1:56:00 PM first a response to your knitting comment. The only thing I learned to knit were little booties but I forgot how to finish them off!! OR how to start them. I was very slow in my church program learning to knit. Those kinds of things boggle my mind, but the actual process of knitting, once I learned it, was so fun to do! Now to see your poem. Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 12/20/2017 2:14:00 PM It is fun. I like any hobby that is also productive.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/19/2017 2:23:00 PM - Great done, Jean - Best wishes in the contest - Merry Christmas, enjoy time in peace - (Hope your daughters come home for Christmas) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 12/19/2017 2:39:00 PM Good evening Sunshine and thank you as always. My precious cargo will arrive together on Thursday. I wish you all that is good at Xmas and the new year. Hugs.

Arturo Michael Date: 12/17/2017 7:31:00 AM Very nice Jean, you went from sensitive to carefree...I'm going try to write one... All the best Jean Login to Reply Arturo Michael Date: 12/17/2017 1:50:00 PM Some days - it's easy-other days - sad, but you did a great job anyway... Jean Murray Date: 12/17/2017 12:05:00 PM I'm so lazy Arturo. I printed off five letter words and could not get past the letter A. Good luck in your endeavour and thank you for your comment.