Nette Onclaud Poet Footle

Five Fun Footles For Contest

STAGES OF MAN-WOMAN RELATIONSHIP

Courtship
Hearts skip

Eyes stuck
Moonstruck

Twelve dates
Soul-mates

New bride
Groom tied

Kids grow
No dough



Jan Allison's Five Fun Footles Contest
``  "dough" is an American word for money
6/9/2015

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Eve Roper June 14, 2015 at 9:54 AM Congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve

James Fraser June 12, 2015 at 12:38 PM Love your set of Footles Nette, and so true in life today, smiles//James :) :)

Richard Lamoureux June 12, 2015 at 8:43 AM Fun ones! If you have a chance check out my group poem. It would be great if you added some words.

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2015 at 11:27 PM Loved yours, Nette. they were among my favorites. Congrats.

Casarah Nance June 11, 2015 at 4:38 PM lol nice :)

Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 3:07 PM loved the humour here Nette:-) Congratulations:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A June 11, 2015 at 2:55 PM Nette :) Congratulations on your FIVE FABULOUS FUNNY FOOTLES. hugs **SKAT**

Monterey Sirak June 10, 2015 at 11:02 AM Yes, that about sums it up!

Paul Callus June 9, 2015 at 4:03 PM This is a clever take on this footle contest, Nette! You went through various chapters to form a life story. Very enjoyable. hugs // paul

Constance La France June 9, 2015 at 3:30 PM Nette, your footles are great, you sure told a story , a sad one, wonderful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, after all these years

M. L. Kiser June 9, 2015 at 2:29 PM And that's how it goes...well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2015 at 1:01 PM - Great, Nette !!! :))) - Luck in conteset ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2015 at 12:57 PM Yours is REALLY good, Nette. I bet you will score higher than mine. I just have a stubborn streak and like to stick with the traditional footle where each one is a tiny joke instead of many telling a story. Wish I could get into that mindset how others are doing them!!

Kash Poet June 9, 2015 at 12:46 PM Enjoyed!Very nice footle.

Juaneco Torrente June 9, 2015 at 11:02 AM Amused by this caricature! Crisp grasp of human nature, lol. All the best and thank you for choosing my work in your contest.

Emile Pinet June 9, 2015 at 10:43 AM Your wit is as sharp as the proverbial tack, and I know you enjoy a good chuckle...Good for you! Emile. #7

Franco Gonza June 9, 2015 at 10:08 AM Comedy at its best! Reminds me of I Love Lucy. Witty kind of poetry!

Judy Konos June 9, 2015 at 9:17 AM And so it goes.......liked it much..nette on cloud 9