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This was a poem from several years ago, sitting on the porch on a very hot summer day, watching my grandchildren.

Five and a Toad They marched in ragged order under the brilliant, hot, drenching sunshine, with thin cotton clouds overhead. Motley assorted clothes, sweating, begrimed, sunburned, but eager faces. One with a cast, blue with purple stars and glitter, a residual from a failed acrobatic jump in the living room. Dreaming the dreams of childhood, they marched along the neighbor’s fence carrying with them, a toad, captured triumphantly to the accompaniment of much screaming, passing it from one grubby little hand to the next. Marching in the brilliant sunlight, they sang or perhaps just giggled. 5 year-olds playing in the waning halcyon summer days of backyard childhood. David Holmes

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Date: 4/19/2021 10:02:00 PM
Wow. I was able to visualize what you so beautifully described. Congratulations David!
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Date: 4/30/2021 2:26:00 PM
George - thank you for reading my poem and your comments - David
Date: 4/17/2021 3:41:00 PM
an outstanding look at a cute childhood scene. And I bet you could recall your own childhood escapades on seeing this. Wonderfully described.
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Date: 4/30/2021 2:27:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for the kind words, and yes, every time I read this it brings a smile to my face - David
Date: 4/16/2021 9:09:00 PM
This is quite lovely, David. It makes me reminisce of my childhood too. Oh, how innocent and brave we were. Cheers! :)
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Date: 4/30/2021 2:28:00 PM
Ansar - you are so right - how innocent and brave we were - thank you for your comment. David
Date: 4/14/2021 2:04:00 PM
David, this was a delightful write! I could easily see the scene you depicted and it brought a smile to my face! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/15/2021 1:36:00 PM
Kim, thank you for your kind comment - this was written a few years ago - a memory of sitting on the porch watching the grandchildren. David

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