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Five and a Half

they were huddled together crying on each others shoulders i was just a couple steeps away and not a tear feel from my eye i was just a couple steeps away i couldn't have felt farther away like they were here on earth well i was lost in space why why wasn't i crying i know i should have been i should of been sad but i wasn't and i didn't not to long before my brother and i copied my uncle and gave him the finger he was banging and yelling at the front door how must have that made him feel his owns son giving him the finger i was just a couple steeps away they were huddled together crying i couldn't have been farther away i didn't cry for sixteen years after my dad died

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Date: 9/8/2009 5:09:00 AM
you unlock the door here ,and dare go through-- we go with you-- it's pride......o
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Book: Shattered Sighs