Five

Five sisters. Each as pretty as the other. Their names are Summer, Autumn, Winter, Spring and nameless. Whom to choose from them? I’d rather… Five sisters! Each as pretty as the other! I’d rather seek the blessing of their mother to put on nameless this engagement ring. Five sisters. Each as pretty as the other. Their names are Summer, Autumn, Winter, Spring. * Ring finger is called nameless finger in Russian. 04.05.2019 Celebrate May with a Triolet (tree-o-lay) Poetry Contest Andrea Dietrich

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/17/2019 2:29:00 PM

Very interesting, Kurt. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/17/2019 3:24:00 PM

Thank you, dear Line. P.S.: Win is too strong of a word, in my case)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/16/2019 8:39:00 PM

Congrats on your placement in the contest, my friend! Best always, gw

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/17/2019 3:22:00 PM

Spasiba, Volkov) As they say, the placement is pants, yet so popular)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2019 5:58:00 PM

Your triolet was one of the most interesting to me. It was unusual and clever. I did not get the rhyme of rather with other, and some of your lines had irregular syllable count; however, this one scored high with me for just delighting me! Congrats.

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/15/2019 6:28:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Andrea. I share your point of view: the Russian accentual-syllabic and English syllabic verses differ - you calculate syllables, we calculate accents. I'm affraid, it can't be helped: despite the fact I write in English, the accentual-syllabic accent makes itself felt. Best wishes to you and your contests)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/14/2019 1:47:00 PM

Hello Kurt, oh , I have enjoyed this poem. So there are 5 sisters, which one got the engagement ring? I like this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/15/2019 6:30:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. Have a nice day and a night too)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/6/2019 10:33:00 AM

I think Andrea will like this Kurt. I enjoyed it very much and I did not know about the ring finger being called nameless. Best for a win. This form is pretty difficult for me. You did well. : )

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/4/2019 7:35:00 PM

Pretty and I like the unique take on this contest.

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/5/2019 1:10:00 PM

Thank you, Kim)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/4/2019 3:38:00 AM

Kurt, I appreciate the * because I had no idea, and it makes the poem even better. I kept expecting Nameless to be something pretty magnificent, and she is!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/4/2019 3:50:00 PM

Thank you, Caren)