Fishing Woes

Bass fishing on nearby creek 
trying new rod I bought this week.
Got plenty of lures
that really ensures
a big catch if I don’t need to leak.

Creek waters are moving real fast
I’m not sure my bladder will last.
Got lure on the line
it’s reeling just fine
but deep water I failed to cast.

In an anxious and manly haste
a true cast I timely displaced.
Latched on to a nest
where hornets did rest
full bladder no longer encased.

Copyright © 2011  By Caryl S. Muzzey

Fifth Place Winner ~ "Contest Limericks About Fishing” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John Freeman
May 27, 2011
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Fraser Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 8:00 AM
Many congratulations Caryl on your win in John's fine Fisherman Limerick contest....:)
Richards Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 6:09 PM
That last line is a hoot!!! Great job, Caryl !!
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 10:16 PM
Congratulations , Caryl. One of the really funny ones!
Phookan Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 11:01 AM
Enjoyed this wonderful write.Congrats Caryl on your win . gautami
Brown Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations on your win Carylin John's Fishing contest. Love, Carol
Ronthorpe Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 8:45 PM
Very nice. Congrats
Mehta Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 6:16 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of John Freeman, Caryl
Dufresne Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 7:31 AM
humorous write Caryl. Got me chuckling. Congratulations to you on your win
Horne Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 6:01 AM
LOL Many congrats on your win : )
Johnson Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 9:49 PM
Great job Caryl. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 9:09 PM
best cheers for garening a greeat win, caryl! smile... huggs!
Freeman Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 8:11 PM
Caryl, Great to see you poem in the winner's corcle. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 3:17 PM
Congrats Caryl on your big win in the fishing Limerick contest my friend..with this really creative write.. enjoy another sweet success with luv and H.M.D. to u ... enjoy..
Devonshire Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 2:51 PM
This is hilarious, Caryl. I can just picture it happening. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 8:51 AM
I enjoyed the fun and humor, Caryl
Kendrick Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 4:27 PM
That would be a nightmare come true..Enjoyed reading this sure winner..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and leaving such kind review of my work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 2:56 PM
great funny ending, Caryl. If you are alone, you can always just pee on the ground. heehee. I think this one will do great in the contest.
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