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Love's wake Stirs lake 17.10.30 Composed for Judy Konos' "One Footle Only"

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Date: 11/2/2017 3:49:00 PM
Ahh!! Cute..I wonder if the fish were biting after that..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/2/2017 9:27:00 PM
Giggle :) thank You! xomo
Date: 11/1/2017 10:10:00 PM
Pretty amazing how just four words can create such imagery. Brilliant, Maureen.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/2/2017 8:08:00 AM
I'm tickled by the angles I hadn't noticed when penned! I've been called an economist (of words) gotta say I do love packing in as much with as few words as I can :) Thank you for this Maria, this means a lot to me. A wonderful day to you! Bless xomo
Date: 11/1/2017 3:46:00 PM
Beautiful simple poem. Thanks for sharing!! Thanks for the comment to my poem. Means a lot! -JWE
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/2/2017 8:01:00 AM
Thank you JW! Cheers :)
Date: 10/31/2017 6:49:00 AM
Brilliant Maureen, just four words which create so many images, so clever. :))
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2017 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Roy! I'm amazed myself to all being read into this piece; an example of a poem having a life of its own. I'm thrilled :) A lovely day to you dear poet xomo!
Date: 10/30/2017 10:46:00 PM
Ah so sweet! As you are...
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2017 8:54:00 AM
Aw you're so sweet! Hugs and thank yous :) xomo!
Date: 10/30/2017 10:17:00 PM
Sows oats/in boats
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2017 8:52:00 AM
Your wit ~ sure fit <3
Date: 10/30/2017 6:08:00 PM
Hi Maureen, You painted such a romantic scene with words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2017 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Alexis! A lovely day to you :) xomo!
Date: 10/30/2017 1:11:00 PM
Day on the lake! Your poem rocks me as do the gentle ripples of the water.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2017 8:49:00 AM
To please the poetess, I wouldn't aim for less :) <3
Date: 10/30/2017 8:56:00 AM
Hearts beat - repeat
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/30/2017 10:49:00 AM
Nice one My chum
Date: 10/30/2017 8:07:00 AM
This is an awesome entry into the contest! One of my favorites so far! I really enjoyed this incredibly clever poem! What a fun piece, Great Work!!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/30/2017 10:54:00 AM
Thank you sweet Russell! A lovely day to you! xomo :)
Date: 10/30/2017 8:04:00 AM
Happy fishing--best for a win!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/30/2017 8:06:00 AM
Lol! Thanks Vijay :) xomo!

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