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Fishing - Haiku

shifting currents cold line vibrates, holds fast a catch nervous ripples fade

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John Lawless

Date: 7/17/2016 8:34:00 AM

AH YES, fishing as the metaphor for life, love, and .....poetry. Very nice Haiku Earl

Earl Schumacker
Date: 7/17/2016 10:32:00 AM

Hi John, Thank you so much for commenting. I like action packed life squeezed into a tiny concise poem and fishing also. Have a great day. Earl

Jan Allison

Date: 7/16/2016 7:56:00 PM

excellent haiku Earl:-) hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker
Date: 7/16/2016 8:04:00 PM

Good evening Jan, Nice to hear from you. Thanks! I hope everything is good with you. The doctors say I am "perfect." We all know that is not entirely true but I do feel great. I'm busy looking for work these days so I can't write too much... but I try. Have a wonderful night. Take care. Earl