Fisherman - Yellow 4

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yellow ochre colored river flows, like a shy child’s beating heart that light up the cosmos beneath callus imprints etched in watery depths below a fisherman on small skiff drifts guided by lazy oars shimmering reflections swirls left behind in the morning mist floors 3/4/2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:26:00 PM

Eve, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA

Sathya Babu

Date: 3/6/2016 6:43:00 AM

Eve Many congratulations on your WIN

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/6/2016 12:55:00 AM

Congrats eve for the Nice poem to win. Hugs. Anisha

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 3/6/2016 12:04:00 AM

Congratulations Eve on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/5/2016 5:47:00 AM

this was an intriguing picture, surreal and strange; this one and the yellow flower field were the two that yielded the most creative imagery, i think...i like "lazy oars", also the rhyme of "skiff drifts" - congrats on your win in the contest!

M Asim Nehal

Date: 3/5/2016 12:44:00 AM

Awesome poem.............Congrats

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/5/2016 12:43:00 AM

Hauntingly beautiful imagery Eve. Congratulations on your well deserved placement. # 7

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2016 7:32:00 PM

Congrats on your descriptive poem, Eve. I missed this one by not realizing it would fill so fast. Will just sit on my dang yellow poem for now!! Love that picture too.