Carrie Richards Poet Clerihew

Fish Stories

.                   CAPTAIN AHAB....

                    Fishing for attention, people might say

                    Revenge he craved, would cause a flurry

                    Complained of one that got away

                    Some said he told a whale of a story!



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Sara Kendrick December 18, 2012 at 12:52 PM Great winning work...Congrats on your name being in the winners' list..Sara

Bukang Liwayway December 14, 2012 at 10:12 AM awesome write friend Carrie :) congratulations on your win!! cheers!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 14, 2012 at 2:04 AM Congratulations on your winning spot Carrie love xx

Seren Roberts December 13, 2012 at 10:40 PM Congratulations on your placement in my contest....Seren

Caryl Ramsdale August 3, 2011 at 3:44 PM HaHaHa...loved it. Very creative and witty! Blessings, Caryl

Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2010 at 11:14 PM this was one of the funnier ones, Carrie. Congratulations for making the list!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 18, 2010 at 4:11 AM Congratulations Carrie, on your placement in the Poetry Soup member contest, “Clara, who? - (CLERIHEW CONTEST)” Sponsored by: John Heck”. (Another winner's circle for you...Hurray!) You deserve some drum rolls! Your poetic humor shines. Smiling, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2010 at 3:17 PM That was a cool entry. Carrie. Looks like you placed with it. congratulatons!

Nick Bagnall February 17, 2010 at 5:03 AM "whale of a story!" - congrats in the competition

Brian Strand February 17, 2010 at 1:07 AM Congrats Carrie Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and your valued kind words about my posting

Margaret Foster February 16, 2010 at 9:39 PM I like this one Carrie...Well done in the contest...Margaret

Joyce Johnson February 16, 2010 at 8:43 PM Good one about the captain. Congratulations. lLThanks for your comment about my placement. Love, Joyce

Sheila Parrish-Spence February 16, 2010 at 8:36 PM Congratulations on this fun tale. Made me think of my mother who was raised in Massachusetts. She would take my younger sister and me to watch the boats and the characters that were in them!

Marty Owens February 16, 2010 at 6:05 PM Congratulations on your win...Cute...enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2010 at 4:53 PM Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in John Heck's contest.. a cool write.. an amazing win .. a great subject ... thankxxx for your congrats too ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Corinne Curcio February 16, 2010 at 2:25 PM Fun one! Congrulations Carrie

Hyle Chu February 12, 2010 at 4:38 PM Very Moby.

Kim Hilliker February 12, 2010 at 1:04 PM Lol. Very cute write. Good luck in the contest.

John Loving Iii February 12, 2010 at 12:55 PM a story of idol worship. John H Loving III