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Fish Stories

. CAPTAIN AHAB.... Fishing for attention, people might say Revenge he craved, would cause a flurry Complained of one that got away Some said he told a whale of a story! ______________________________________

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/18/2012 12:52:00 PM

Great winning work...Congrats on your name being in the winners' list..Sara

Robert Jerore

Date: 12/14/2012 6:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Carrie... I'm certain Captain Ahab had a sinking feeling this one was not going to get away... YarnSpinner

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 12/14/2012 10:12:00 AM

awesome write friend Carrie :) congratulations on your win!! cheers!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/14/2012 2:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning spot Carrie love xx

Seren Roberts

Date: 12/13/2012 10:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest....Seren

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 8/3/2011 3:44:00 PM

HaHaHa...loved it. Very creative and witty! Blessings, Caryl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2010 11:14:00 PM

this was one of the funnier ones, Carrie. Congratulations for making the list!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/18/2010 4:11:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie, on your placement in the Poetry Soup member contest, “Clara, who? - (CLERIHEW CONTEST)” Sponsored by: John Heck”. (Another winner's circle for you...Hurray!) You deserve some drum rolls! Your poetic humor shines. Smiling, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2010 3:17:00 PM

That was a cool entry. Carrie. Looks like you placed with it. congratulatons!

Nick Bagnall

Date: 2/17/2010 5:03:00 AM

"whale of a story!" - congrats in the competition

Brian Strand

Date: 2/17/2010 1:07:00 AM

Congrats Carrie Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and your valued kind words about my posting

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/16/2010 9:39:00 PM

I like this one Carrie...Well done in the contest...Margaret

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/16/2010 8:43:00 PM

Good one about the captain. Congratulations. lLThanks for your comment about my placement. Love, Joyce

Sheila Parrish-Spence

Date: 2/16/2010 8:36:00 PM

Congratulations on this fun tale. Made me think of my mother who was raised in Massachusetts. She would take my younger sister and me to watch the boats and the characters that were in them!

Marty Owens

Date: 2/16/2010 6:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...Cute...enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2010 4:53:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in John Heck's contest.. a cool write.. an amazing win .. a great subject ... thankxxx for your congrats too ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Corinne Curcio

Date: 2/16/2010 2:25:00 PM

Fun one! Congrulations Carrie

Hyle Chu

Date: 2/12/2010 4:38:00 PM

Very Moby.

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/12/2010 1:04:00 PM

Lol. Very cute write. Good luck in the contest.

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/12/2010 12:55:00 PM

a story of idol worship. John H Loving III