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Fish N the Lake Won'T Eat the Worm On the Line-

the fish in the lake does not want to be catch caught he won't eat the worm Splish splash fish muddles blown bubbles you can't eat me I won't eat this worm 4/17/21 Written words by James Edward Lee Sr © 2021

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Sotto Poet

Date: 4/17/2021 9:58:00 AM

Very well penned Haiku James, with a nice humouristic side; if they're fed a big worm, they'll grow in length, not in-depth:) Best regards

James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 4/17/2021 6:34:00 PM

Ahh! Lasaad if fish had the power to always bite/cut the line and get away with catch work or whatever bait ha ha ha now that would be funny! Thanks for reading James