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Fish in the Pond

The waters of the pond drying Dissolving into misty thin vapours. In a few days, The pond. will become bare. But the distant clouds shifted paths Flew to other directions. In the shallow depths of the pond Fishes dart swiftly Gleaming through the waning stream. But O wandering clouds, Where have you flown?

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Date: 2/6/2025 6:30:00 PM
Wow, eloquent picture you created just gave me a flashback of a drying puddle in the riverbed by my house which had some tadpoles in it, which I took back to our house and put in a bucket.
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Date: 1/12/2025 3:18:00 PM
You are so unique in how you write. I really like this. Have I put you on my followed poet list yet? If not, I will do it now
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 1/18/2025 4:34:00 AM
Not yet.Thanks for your comment.
Date: 1/7/2025 4:05:00 PM
Your poem touches me at the thought of those poor fish that would certainly suffer and die if no fresh water arrived to refill the drying pond. So fingers crossed for those clouds to come and save the day! // paul
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 1/9/2025 6:40:00 AM
Thank you.Wish you a happy New Year.
Date: 1/5/2025 4:49:00 PM
Enjoyed this descriptive poen I noticed you are such a caring person! Pangie xx
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 1/5/2025 6:58:00 PM
Thank you. Wish you a happy New Year
Date: 1/4/2025 3:44:00 AM
beautiful poem, may be there is a metaphor wishes
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 1/4/2025 4:37:00 AM
Thanks for your observation.Wish you a happy New Year
Date: 1/4/2025 3:11:00 AM
- "the distant clouds shifted paths" ... but will return ... lovely poem, Akham :) - hugs
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 1/4/2025 4:35:00 AM
Thanks for your encouraging comment.Wish you a happy New Year
Date: 1/3/2025 4:23:00 AM
"But O wandering clouds, Where have you flown?"-- Beautifully, powerfully said. Wish I had the answers...higher power does not always seem to listen...care.... Then at times when I seem to not have a prayer in the world...there is a miracle. Faith is a necessary mystery. Fascinating read. Thank you.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 1/3/2025 4:57:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful comment Wish you a happy New Year.

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