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First Thoughts

Genial waves of warmth speak through gentle rays Awaken my senses the marigold sings her joy painted steps are born Fragrant juniper fill the horizon gusts of innocence flush my cheeks first wiffs grab my being as soft touches trace her core Welcome into my sunlight white wishes still endure supplanted suppliant kisses you've entered through my door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/2/2017 9:13:00 PM
When we will here your second thoughts? Lovely!
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Date: 8/2/2017 9:13:00 PM
Yes I know you just heard mine!!! LOL
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Date: 7/31/2017 5:50:00 AM
Love the "gusts of innocence flush my cheeks" line. A very nice welcome for the one who has entered your door, Tim.
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Date: 7/31/2017 4:44:00 AM
I love this, Tim! It has raised my spirit within!
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Date: 7/31/2017 4:11:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts my friend...great write Tim...^WW^
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Date: 7/30/2017 10:47:00 PM
The fragrance of summer and summer gardens! beautiful!
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Date: 7/30/2017 2:34:00 PM
Beautiful....and sweet. When things come to be...life is full of ecstasy.
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Date: 7/30/2017 11:46:00 AM
blooming :)
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Date: 7/30/2017 10:52:00 AM
Great poem Tim, seamless and original, an enjoyable read to say the least!:-)
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Date: 7/30/2017 10:03:00 AM
If I wasn't so old I'd fall in love with these young man ,,, your words always touch me... there should be more love in this world instead of disappointments and mistrust.... Hugs dear friend~*
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Date: 7/30/2017 8:33:00 AM
Wow Tim! a beauty to read this morning and Marigold sings her joy! Great line :)
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