First Thoughts

Genial waves of warmth 
speak through gentle rays 
 
Awaken my senses 
the marigold sings her joy 
painted steps are born 
 
Fragrant juniper fill the horizon 
gusts of innocence flush my cheeks 
first wiffs grab my being 
as soft touches trace her core 
 
Welcome into my sunlight 
white wishes still endure 
supplanted suppliant kisses 
you've entered through my door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/2/2017 9:13:00 PM
When we will here your second thoughts? Lovely!
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Date: 8/2/2017 9:13:00 PM
Yes I know you just heard mine!!! LOL
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Date: 7/31/2017 5:50:00 AM
Love the "gusts of innocence flush my cheeks" line. A very nice welcome for the one who has entered your door, Tim.
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Date: 7/31/2017 4:44:00 AM
I love this, Tim! It has raised my spirit within!
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Date: 7/31/2017 4:11:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts my friend...great write Tim...^WW^
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Date: 7/30/2017 10:47:00 PM
The fragrance of summer and summer gardens! beautiful!
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Date: 7/30/2017 2:34:00 PM
Beautiful....and sweet. When things come to be...life is full of ecstasy.
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Date: 7/30/2017 11:46:00 AM
blooming :)
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Date: 7/30/2017 10:52:00 AM
Great poem Tim, seamless and original, an enjoyable read to say the least!:-)
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Date: 7/30/2017 10:03:00 AM
If I wasn't so old I'd fall in love with these young man ,,, your words always touch me... there should be more love in this world instead of disappointments and mistrust.... Hugs dear friend~*
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Date: 7/30/2017 8:33:00 AM
Wow Tim! a beauty to read this morning and Marigold sings her joy! Great line :)
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