First Thoughts

Genial waves of warmth 
speak through gentle rays 
 
Awaken my senses 
the marigold sings her joy 
painted steps are born 
 
Fragrant juniper fill the horizon 
gusts of innocence flush my cheeks 
first wiffs grab my being 
as soft touches trace her core 
 
Welcome into my sunlight 
white wishes still endure 
supplanted suppliant kisses 
you've entered through my door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Vaso Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 9:13 PM
Yes I know you just heard mine!!! LOL
Vaso Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 9:13 PM
When we will here your second thoughts? Lovely!
Lane Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 5:50 AM
Love the "gusts of innocence flush my cheeks" line. A very nice welcome for the one who has entered your door, Tim.
Wolf Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 4:44 AM
I love this, Tim! It has raised my spirit within!
Warrior Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 4:11 AM
Beautiful thoughts my friend...great write Tim...^WW^
Vaso Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 10:47 PM
The fragrance of summer and summer gardens! beautiful!
Manassian Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 2:34 PM
Beautiful....and sweet. When things come to be...life is full of ecstasy.
Nance Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 11:46 AM
blooming :)
O.J. Hunt Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Great poem Tim, seamless and original, an enjoyable read to say the least!:-)
Roper Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 10:03 AM
If I wasn't so old I'd fall in love with these young man ,,, your words always touch me... there should be more love in this world instead of disappointments and mistrust.... Hugs dear friend~*
Sands Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Wow Tim! a beauty to read this morning and Marigold sings her joy! Great line :)
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